Mrsnugglepug - 2 months ago

I hope you make one about sparkle hopefully anal vore. Also this story was really good enjoyed it.

Nandelion - 2 months ago

Thanks. Yeah, other stories get straight to the point, but I think showing the interactions that lead to that can be really powerful. Putting the characters first before the vore is my focus, and it’s really fun.

My goal has always been to give most Genshin female characters a story, so it’s a matter of when. Mona was the one that brought me to Genshin, after all.

Artist-san - 2 months ago

I sure enjoyed this. It was a nice break from the content I usually see for this tag. I hope you'll keep writing these for fun. I'll read a story starring Mona written by you in a heartbeat.

Giorno1234 - 3 months ago

Would love to see a Ruan Mei story from you

Mrsnugglepug - 4 months ago

Are you still planning on doing the sparkle one... possibly anal vore? Asking for a friend ( that freind is me)

AphWishes - 5 months ago

Super late comment to this I know but this is a super good story and it came out really well—

For one the title is just good lol but in general it’s just such a good story between the two and feels just right to their characters in the process~! Besides who can say no to Yunli melting Yanqing down, it’s very good uwu

Nandelion - 7 months ago

Yay!

Thank you for reading it.

'The conquering of the other with one's soles' was def necessary, heh. I mean it was Yunli, and along with her hot temperament, it laid out the grounds for her to humble him with her feet. It really was a golden opportunity that I couldn't miss and I had a lot of fun with it!

As for the vore scenes, well, I feel it's a tad obvious that I've taken a strong inspiration from some of your recent stories (especially the Silver Wolf one is just chef-kiss...). You make use of some really creative and powerful expressions (can't forget all the flavorful onomatopoeia you come up with!) that helped me come with mine. Keep being as amazing as you are.

Biased or not, I always appreciate your comments. I'm working on being more consistent so your words really encourage me.

Fatedmeal - 7 months ago

Finally got around to reading this great story!

Loved the way you detailed combat between these two young and monstrous prodigies. My adoration continued unbroken when one conquered the other with specific utilization of the dust-laden and wrinkled underbelly of her sole. Of course, in vein with the theme of this site, I must not fail to mention that you exquisitely handled the vore scenes in this story. From evoking imagery with your diction to the precise comparisons you made (the muffin that Yunli’s burgeoning abdominal swell became with the brawn of her thighs merging hotly with her tense dermal layers was an amazing inclusion). Of course I’m biased in saying all this due to my inclination towards vore and feet. I will give a nod to the excellent attention to the seemingly endless cacophony that spilled from the young combatant’s garrulous insides.

Nandelion - 9 months ago

Thank you! It worried me a little when I was working on setting up the scene, and how Firefly gets up to the point when she *noms* the Jepella fellows, plus character interactions. But I'm glad that it gave you an amazing experience.
Also had a lot of fun detailing their process of turning into molten sludge for Wife's curves.

Fatedmeal - 9 months ago

Setting up the scene, introducing the characters, detailing their interactions to the audience to make them feel alive to us, and then to use your mastery of diction to depict the brutality contained within that beautiful flower filled with flames. To render those living anthropomorphic entities as fated additions to Firefly’s frame, and to make the people that you made seem so alive only to perish, resulted in a most exquisite story.

In short, this was a fantastic read.

Fatedmeal - 9 months ago

Setting up the scene, introducing the characters, detailing their interactions to the audience to make them feel alive to us, and then to use your mastery of diction to depict the brutality contained within that beautiful flower filled with flames. To render those living anthropomorphic entities as fated additions to Firefly’s frame, and to make the people that you made seem so alive only to perish, resulted in a most exquisite story.

In short, this was a fantastic read.

Mrsnugglepug - 9 months ago

are you still planning to do a story with Sparkle as the pred?

DanMeister - 1 year ago

Nice Work! Finally best girl gets a vore story lmao.

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Thank you! I'm glad that I somehow managed to nail your fav. SW is def a treat. Poor March too, but she'll get her chance one day.

Also, heck yea I'm writing one! I love Sparkle so much and I'd let her break m- I mean I want to take my time with it, so sometime next week. One that would make Aha proud.

Ihsvenolifeatall - 1 year ago

Great Story! First long form silver wolf vore story on this site and it’s great, sw is my favourite character so this is a nice thing to see when I got on the site. The bantering between stelle and March is also funny, if I may ask do you have any plans to write a story about sparkle?

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Thank you!

weatherforecast - 1 year ago

looking great! :＞

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Yup, the one and only emergency food.

SmaxTheDestroyer - 1 year ago

Always good to see Paimon fulfilling her true purpose~

Beanstalk - 1 year ago

fix: “ia” change to “is”

Beanstalk - 1 year ago

fix: “ia” change to “is”

Beanstalk - 1 year ago

SO，ia March and Gui ate pela and lynx，either of them digested the two girls？

HildaVGoneril - 1 year ago

Hu Tao thighs are to die for

Beanstalk - 1 year ago

no thighs,too thick is not beautiful in my mind

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Don't forget her thighs. All that fat can also make for a plush cushioning.

Beanstalk - 1 year ago

I'm glad to be Hutao's boob fat！that's very important to my this wife

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Yup, Hu Thighs blessed me these days, so Hu Thighs for everyone.

MugenNoSaga - 1 year ago

Interesting story.

Gotta say, was expecting a few things to happen while reading it. For example I was expecting a bit more in-belly banter when Seele or Natasha came in with March.
Another thing I thought it was going to happen was Stelle feeding herself to Clara to have it like the cherry on top but was not expecting for her to be forced in (a bit sad it was kinda fast).

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Thank you!

Heh, it was so good that I really couldn't resist feeding Clara a bit too many people...

TheWitness - 1 year ago

Wow, very good story! :D

I'm glad that the drawing I did for UraniumCore92 was part of your inspiration :3

Beanstalk - 1 year ago

I very much hope that this article of yours will be painted into a picture, especially in the end Fuxuan eat QQ ,the round belly full of milk tea and QQ warped in the white stockings,that would be awesome！

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Thank you!
Not necessarily a part 2 but yea more Fu stories later.

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Thanks for reading even if it was a bit lengthy! Yea, this idea of a fate so great that no decision will bend the final result is a recurrent with Fu Xuan. I wanted to portray that inevitability of fate to the best of my capacity, since it's super interesting. Thus, I was a bit worried how the process of preventer to enforcer would came out, but I'm glad that it seems you liked it.

The number of visions was finite, the way she acts upon them wouldn't spawn more. All changes and her decisions would be already accounted for in the divination. Nonetheless, of course Qingque wasn't the only person with a future in the Luofu, so she'll definitely have more.

MugenNoSaga - 1 year ago

Gotta say that outside being kinda lengthy in the word department for my taste.
The idea of Fu Xuan attempting to save somebody from being consumed multiple times by different entities in different ways and in the end for Fu Xuan herself to do what she tried to stop so many times. Makes me wonder how many untold visions there were, maybe Fu Xuan could write books about it, sadly Qingque would never get to know.

Spys1204 - 1 year ago

Great work can’t wait for a possible part 2.

Beanstalk - 1 year ago

man,Herta is so pretty,and i need a draw which shows Settle struggling in her

BroTato - 1 year ago

Herta pred let's gooo

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Nice, so that means I'll have to do more of them. As a first I didn't have a solid base for mass vore but for macro micro you set a very good reference!

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

I’m usually not a fan of mass vore pieces, but this is an exception. I think that, in general, I really enjoy your post-vore belly play scenes. Although, at least for this story, the way that you described the dream sequence made it a close second.

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Glad to know this one got to be your rare case of anal vore! Thanks!

Indighost - 1 year ago

I dont usually look for anal vore but this was great! Nice work

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Analogies really spice up my imagination! Also yup, I try to keep descriptions dynamic so the flow of events is never broken. Keeping attention of whoever reads is my main goal.

Heh, now that she found out this, I bet she will be 'testing' for a loong time

Kurczak48 - 1 year ago

Love the imaginative descriptions! Narration came out just right in terms of pacing. Slow enough to keep enjoying rich wording and fast enough to not lose focus halfway through paragraphs.

Also...cmon Xiangling...starting tests with outlander...now she needs to check how "local ingredient" would taste!

Nandelion - 1 year ago

Thank you!

mrcxy - 1 year ago

huohuo is best girl

BroTato - 1 year ago

Would love to see Gwen eat folks for a stream or something lol

Nandelion - 1 year ago

hehe, I thought kind of gave it away that huohuo was the one eating. Also, maaaybe I will do another more complete, also fuller, Huohuo in the future! I like her a lot

Beanstalk - 1 year ago

nice ！I thought will be Guinaifen eat Huohuo,but you choose the opposite one,just sadly I can't see the fulness Huohuo, big boobs fox girl are the best！

BroTato - 1 year ago

You know, if Lumi just eats someone whole, and keep em fed with fried eggs, she essentially has infinite food

Sacrifice one egg for an entire person? That's a damn steal

bonkers50 - 1 year ago

Lumine pred is such a rarity, we love to see it

Fatedmeal - 1 year ago

Wow! What a first post this was, and from a portent that might be the epitome of modesty. I am not saying this facetiously when I say that this is the best Lumine pred story on Eka’s Portal so far. Including my own story. You’re a great author and I’m glad that I got to be one of your early readers. The way that you entwined analogies and concise diction to depict an alluring scene was like hearing the melodic tune of a morning lark.

It was such a rousing experience.

I would absolutely love to see more work for you. In fact, I demand that you will plant more stories like this at the Portal.

Voshine - 1 year ago

Very nice story, welcome to eka (=