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Tags: Absorption Arven bereavement Betrayal Betrayed Prey body horror Butt Butt crush criminal prey Cruel Pred dehumanization Deserving Prey Digestion Disposal drowning drowning in drool emma (pokemon) F/F F/fm F/M Fatal Female Pred Female Prey florian Graphic digestion grief handplay humans used as toys Juliana Justified predation kendama Macro/Micro Male Prey mature pred Mawplay mouthplay Multiple Preys Nemona Oral Vore perrin Photographer pred Pokemon Pokemon Scarlet and Violet Poppy (Pokemon) Post-Vore Rika (Pokemon) sacrificed prey Scat sentient ass sentient butt sentient fat sentient pudge Soft Vore spitplay Struggling prey Toilet toilet disposal tomboy pred torture Toyplay unaware Unwilling Pred Unwilling Prey Urination vengeful pred Violent Violent prey Willing Pred
Summary: The death of mice. Past and Present. The struggle of a forced indolence. The terror of robbed autonomy.
Disclaimer: There will be some content alluding to grief and death, which won’t be portrayed in a sensually charged light.
Word Count: 15,893 words
Author’s Notes: I hope that I didn’t leave you all hanging on the edge of your seats for too long. Especially, after the precarious state that Florian was left in last chapter. Will he be able to get out of his wobbling fate, or will he be frozen in frame.
Please let me know what you think about the story in the comments below. I still feel a little rough around the edges after returning to writing after so long, so hearing any of your thoughts would be helpful. I would even be happy to be direct messaged, if you don't feel comfortable with publicly commenting.
What is a kendama?: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kendama
Character References:
1. Right click on link and press open link in new tab.
2. Copy the link and paste it onto a new tab.
3. Don’t know what to tell you, you have to type in the character’s name and franchise in the search bar and find the image yourself.
Juliana: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Juliana_(game)#/media/File%3AScarlet_Female_Trainer.png
Perrin: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Perrin#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Perrin.png
Rika: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Rika#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Rika.png
Irida (?): https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Irida#/media/File%3ALegends_Arceus_Irida.png
Arven: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Arven#/media/File%3AViolet_Arven.png
Emma: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Emma#/media/File%3AEmma_PG.png
Florian (Perrin’s Ass): https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/113708057
Nemona: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Nemona#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Nemona.png
Poppy: https://m.bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Poppy#/media/File%3AScarlet_Violet_Poppy.png
Thumbnail Reference: https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=9923984&tags=rika_%28pokemon%29+solo+
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Posted by Whymanamajeff 11 months ago Report
Wow, this is amazing! The disposal scene is to die for ;)
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Thank you.
And yes…people did die for that disposal scene. Not sure if you noticed, with how small they were, but two of them contributed to Rika’s stool with their lives.
Posted by Edddd 11 months ago Report
Really loving Florians new look! hope he keeps it for a while and gets a lil... accustomed to it ;)
Fantasizing a bad end where there is no means of escape and everyone has to just come to terms with Perrins butt being conscious. Said butt would have to embrace its duties and leave its past memories and self behind, or surely go crazy <3
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Glad to see you commenting again on the P.A.L.D.E.A. series. Although, I guess it's only possible now that I'm back to churning out chapters.
:-)
As for the latter part of your comment. I did have this bad end in mind. Unfortunately, I have this other Bad End that was supposed to be released on Pokemon Day, but was delayed until November (it is one involving a certain Electric Type Gym leader streamer). So a P.A.L.D.E.A. Bad End involving Perrin, if I'm not torn away from it by a more tantalizing bad end, won't happen until next year Pokemon Day.
Regardless, I'm glad to see that we're both still on this ride.
Posted by Edddd 11 months ago Report
Ay Im not goin anywhere anytime soon! Your writing is still the most... 'thought provoking' on the site for me ^^
Thanks a lot for the teaser too 0.o thats definitely one I also had in mind, looking forward to that.
P.s. as someone who only ever fantasizes about writing, I really admire your work ethic through these years!
Posted by SSV 11 months ago Report
Glad to know there’s some hope for Florian. Now I’m wondering what Iirda (?] meant by finally found it.
I think you should add more space between sentences. Some of them are bashed together and makes it difficult to read. But other than that this is a really great chapter. Can’t wait to see what’s next!
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Thanks! Yup, I’m glad to know that there is a way forward for Florian, and that he isn’t going to be left behind.
When you say more space between sentences, do you mean like a larger gap between paragraphs? Or do you mean that I should add more spaces between the sentences within one paragraph?
As some of Rika’s dialogue is a larger font due to her being a relative giantess, so her speech would have been closer to the surrounding text (which I can account for in future stories). Was that your issue reading?
Or was it something else? Like something that you’ve noticed in my recent stories since I came back from my hiatus. As I switched from posting stories .docx format to doc. format. Because I thought that it would fix the issues of spaces/gaps suddenly appearing within a word document, which I’ve received in the past. Please let me know if this the case. Either by replying to this comment or even sending me a DM about it.
As I’ve haven’t had that much difficulty reading this chapter while editing it (but I would have a differing perspective since I wrote it). So any variance in your reading experience is something that I would appreciate to hear about. As other people might be going through the same thing.
Posted by SSV 11 months ago Report
What I mean is adding more spaces between the sentences within one paragraph. I’m not sure for others but when I’m reading a book or something on the internet. And it’s a long paragraphs. I have a hard time reading.
So when I try to read the long paragraph, I’m able too but it would feels like a chore. My brain just wants to skim through it. Which I definitely don’t want to do, but my brain is like “TOO LONG NEXT!”
For example: you have a paragraph in this chapter that is about 15 spaces down (if that makes sense] with no space. It’s hard to read that and to keep my brain from skimming through. I usually manage when it’s about 10 or less spaces down.
That’s just me though. I apologize if I sound like I’m just complaining.
Posted by SSV 11 months ago Report
Oh and when should we expect the next chapter?
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
I have a writing schedule on both my commission status page and my discord for all my work, which is usually accurate to the month of when I'll post stories for this year. I also post the predicted release of the next chapter of the series within the description of the P.A.L.D.E.A. folder itself. Just click on P.A.L.D.E.A. Series in the top green bar and look at the bottom of the box with the summary description of the series. At least that is for future reference when you are wondering.
As I'll answer your question right now. The current plan is for the next P.A.L.D.E.A. chapter to be the second to third story that I release this month. I'm currently working on an F/GO story...as I realized that I've written 18 stories this year and only one has been an F/GO piece. So you should expect chapter 19 not this week, maybe next week, but definitely by the third week after that. The last chapter of the second season (Ch. 20) should be released early into the month of June, so I can focus on more F/GO releases and the Father's Day story.
Posted by SSV 11 months ago Report
Might be a dumb question but what is F/GO?
Posted by Fatedmeal 11 months ago Report
Fate/Grand Order. It’s a gacha game set in the Fate Universe. It’s also one of the series that I write a bunch of stories for. As you can tell by my gallery folder for the series.