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Lilith has always had it out Zoe, treating the class genius like total garbage any chance she got. After one too many missteps in her own educational pursuit, the unlikely duo are paired together for one last study session.
Also, my first story with more graphic digestion, let me know if it was too much or too little.
Comments are always welcome. Constructive criticism, suggestions or even just showing some love, anything is appreciated. Seriously, anything you have to say, I want to hear, I encourage it!
Thumbnail is AI generated because, surprise surprise, I'm still broke as all hell.
Cheers everyone.
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Posted by Discordance 10 months ago Report
Loved this one, “bad ends” are always my favorite. Thank you!
Posted by DocClamor 10 months ago Report
Appreciate that, my friend. Bit of a fan of them myself so I thought I'd give it a go. Glad you liked it.
Posted by Whereaminow27 10 months ago Report
I hope Lilith gets whats comin.
Posted by DocClamor 10 months ago Report
We'll just have to see what happens haha
Posted by AnAccount 10 months ago Report
I saw the idiot fucking up somehow and zoe discovering a side of herself she shouldnt have but same old bully trope is just fine too. Good work!
Posted by DocClamor 10 months ago Report
Thank you brother haha. Got plenty of other stuff cooking, so you may be pleasantly surprised.
Posted by iliketoread 10 months ago Report
Hot
Posted by DocClamor 10 months ago Report
Wasn't sure which angle to go with, bully getting their way or the victim getting their revenge. Glad I chose right haha
Posted by TinyHunter 10 months ago Report
Goddamn, this is like my perfects scenario...well done dude, always nice to see a new good writer on this site.
Posted by DocClamor 10 months ago Report
Hey hey! Really appreciate the kind words, to hear my writing is “good” is encouraging haha, thanks! Mind if I asked what in particular you liked?
Posted by TinyHunter 10 months ago Report
I think your dialogue and characters are believable, which I find is pretty rare on this site. That's the main thing that pulls me into a story like this.
I like how many of your preds like Lilith don't initially plan to vore their prey, because of how fucked up it is, but once it's convenient for them they give into their darker impulses. That makes them feel more real to me as well.
Beyond that I just like mean bitches making nice girls into their lunch, lol. Your story definitely scratched that itch.