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Though the long, rambling speech isn't necessary for Adora's power to work, it does do a hell of a job kickstarting it!
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Posted by folomo 10 months ago Report
Getting flashbacks of how all this started. xD
Posted by Novapyro 10 months ago Report
Oh Glimmer, you sneaky minx.
Posted by EloquentOrc 10 months ago Report
Really enjoy the slow buildup in this. :)
Posted by Spider8Fiend 10 months ago Report
I appreciate how naturally Glimmer's dialogue flows here. Simply by connecting each word bubble and flowing in a clockwise fashion, we not only follow along with her speech, but watch her thought process unfold in subsequent panels. The only hiccup would be Perfuma's first word bubble, since the second half of her dialogue is closer to Adora's word bubble in panel 1. The eye is drawn to that first.
That said, credit where credit is due! Everything else works so well here that its hardly worth consideration! Not only are the expressions on everyone oozing emotion, but much like Glimmer's speech, the focus from Mermista to Perfuma works naturally with the construction of panel 2. It just makes for such a well-rounded two-page spread!