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The tiny life can be hard, so sometimes you have to take odd jobs. You find an offer that's too good to be true, if only you're willing to be around some big people for a little bit. Surely nothing could go wrong?
Yes, I'm back! Took me a long time to get around to finishing this one. It's kind of all over the place, but I think it worked out. Next one will be shorter, and hopefully quicker lol. I never promise anything though!
Special thanks to iliketoread for proofing and to another anonymous helper.
All feedback welcome!
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Posted by Drakovyr 7 months ago Report
Wow, that was a long read !
Really loved it,the setting is very cool, the pod idea is perfect and the technology you described to used to make them feel equal is really great !
The first part was a bit long but that's one of the best way to setup everything correctly imo so not a problem ;)
I was wondering, what size is the pod ?
Because at first I thought he would be swallowed inside the pod, but figured it would be weird if the pod was swallowable because it's supposed to prevent this haha
Posted by hatter 7 months ago Report
Glad to hear you liked it! I did want to go a little heavier on buildup and worldbuilding for a change this time. It's tricky to find the balance between building up anticipation and just rambling on for too long lol.
In the story he's about 2.5 inches and the pod needs a lot of equipment and padding so I envisioned it with at least the size of a coke can, probably a bit larger. Definitely not small enough for that. At that size, he'd be pretty hard to get down on his own. Thankfully Chelsea was up for it. :)
Posted by carrierheart 7 months ago Report
Woof, what a spicy one. Watching from now on!
Posted by Animo24 3 months ago Report
This is a really great story. Can't wait to read more from you
Posted by hatter 3 months ago Report
Thank you! I hope I won't take forever this time, but no promises.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 months ago Report
Wow, that was an amazing story. I wish there were more writers like you around. I feel like you captured the school dynamics perfectly, not to mention everyone’s reactions, and the *descriptions*. Top notch stuff.
Posted by hatter 2 months ago Report
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. It's really hard to tell when I get things right or not lol. Although I'll always be proud of my descriptions if nothing else, because it's my favorite part of writing anything.
Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 months ago Report
I know the feeling, and you definitely got things very much right on this one. The pride is well earned.
Posted by iliketoread 2 months ago Report
I know I already provided my opinions when I did proofing but just wanted to say I keep coming back to this story, its one of my favorites. It's got me all inspired to learn how to write with this much style, pizzazz, and fun preds.
Posted by hatter 2 months ago Report
Thanks! Every little comment is appreciated. I try!
Posted by Natolin 2 months ago Report
This story is sooo good! I keep coming back to it can’t wait to see what you cook up next ^-^
Posted by hatter 2 months ago Report
Thanks! ^_^