Posted by TallyHallJoe 6 months ago Report

This story is hot. I love how Nathan doesn't like to be pred.

Posted by Elite 6 months ago Report

This was a good story! I liked the dynamic between Nathan & Ellie, plus the slight worldbuilding about the nature of preds. I gotta ask though, did the story get cut off at the end when you posted it? It seems like the story just kinda cuts off just as everything is happening.

Posted by iliapoerion 6 months ago Report

No, that's where it ends. Honestly, I wrote that last line and just liked it so much that I decided to end it there.

Posted by Chrismcool 6 months ago Report

So no part 2?

Posted by predlucyforhire 6 months ago Report

Well. If he's lucky once she's digested his body will have the resources to finish making his blood.
Actually I like that idea, he doesn't have the supply. But swallowing prey would help speed up the process. Cock voring might not give him the nutrients properly though. (Depending on how your version of digestion works )

Posted by iliapoerion 6 months ago Report

I didn't put too much thought into the "blood" part.

Honestly, the more I try to think about adding "realism" to my vore stories, the more I shy away from the physics of it. The rest of it is comparably easy.

Sociologically? Society can adapt. I modeled the population via birth/mortality rates for this setting and how it affects things. Different jobs being prioritized, different social structures, etc. I get a lot of story prompt ideas from this.

Psychologically? The virus that started Vore in this setting made death-by-vore less scary to the human psyche than it should be. Humans are already demonstrably better at assessing risk of certain kinds of death than others, so that seems easy enough.

Biologically? Increased elasticity, changes in fat deposition, changes to how we process oxygen, changes to how the bones in the ribs attach, etc. Lots that stretches the bounds of credulity, but nothing that I can't at least lampshade.

But Physics? I have no clue. Water is almost incompressible. Humans are mostly water. I don't have Disposal in any of my settings, so... Where does the water go? Even if we add a large hand-wave as with Biology and say that, I dunno, predators can compress water... That's still a huge problem! That means they are ABSURDLY DENSE. A predator who eats other predators would start sinking through the ground when they walk. If a predator has enough blood for a literal Human-sized erection, then where does that blood go while he is flaccid?

So... Yeah. No idea about the blood.