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Always be careful what you agree to while drunk, kids.
I should be doing actual work but instead I chose to finish up one of the vore stories that are brewing on my hard drive. Not the most creative or poetic, by any means, but it was the easiest to finish.
I found myself struggling to write the digestion part of this, and it falls well short of the detail in the swallowing section. Ironic, because I love long, gurgly, digestion more than anything. It might be that my brain can't let itself get too horny if it wants to actually finish writing.
Anyway, drop me a comment and let me know your thoughts!
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Posted by Randomdude5 6 months ago Report
I really like drunken bets as a plot tool to get the vore to happen. I also like how casual Gavin was about it. I really like the part where Gavin says that at least Rachel got eaten by someone she knew.
Posted by Bugbarw 6 months ago Report
Thank you! I worried a bit about about writing an overused trope, but if it ain't broke...
Posted by Randomdude5 6 months ago Report
Yeah, it works. Of course there are ways to subvert or play with common tropes that can put a new twist on them.
I guess my biggest complaint about the drunken bet or dare trope is that it limits post vore interaction, since the characters are drunk and often fall asleep. However that is just because post vore interaction is one of my vore kinks, so I am biased.
Posted by Bright 5 months ago Report
Nicely done swallowing writing.
I quite enjoy bets :P
Posted by Bugbarw 5 months ago Report
I'm trying to practice being more descriptive, so I'm glad that stood out!