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Her first prey
By VictisDeSade -- Report
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Vivianne's mother has had enough. If her daughter wants to be a pred, no more putting it off - she starts today!
Contains long digestion, Female Only, Oral vore, unwilling prey, school setting. 8.8k words
A longer work, and a bit experimental. Inspired by the excellent OsmiumOrchid's SMVA setting, and the lovely folk on their discord.
As always, I'd love to hear your feedback on what you enjoyed and what you'd like to see more of. I have a lot of half-written works right now, so if you've requested/suggested something, there's good odds it's on the way!
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Posted by LIamINSecret 1 month ago Report
a fantastic first-time pred story!
Posted by iliapoerion 1 month ago Report
Oh man, this is fantastic! I really enjoyed the practical considerations of getting used to such a large belly. I think you did a good job of skirting the edge of getting too graphic in terms of digestion. I enjoyed the shifting in her opinion of Camilla as the story went on.
Posted by Randomdude5 1 month ago Report
I like first time pred stories, and this one is no exception. I am glad that SMVA has inspired another author. One of the things that I like is how Vivianne's mom pressures her to eat a girl. Another thing I like is how casual vore is. No one is calling the cops to stop someone from being digested. Girls digesting each other is just another everyday occurrence in this world. I also like how Vivianne had trouble swallowing, moving, and digesting her prey. It makes sense that a new pred would struggle with these things.
I liked this story so much, that I hope to read more stories about Vivianne, or ones set in this setting.
Posted by Vilebird 13 days ago Report
great story! it was fun getting into the minutia of dealing with a big meal for a first timer, and I really like how Viv and Camilla's 'relationship' developed and changed even over the short time they were together. would definitely love seeing more stories in this vein!