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Here's the sequel, who would've guessed their would be a part 2 and our protagonist wasn't finished after the previous story's ending. Decided to include a little bit about what is happening on the inside this time because internal scenes are hot, especially when the prey start piling up.
Once again took forever to write but a decent chunk got scrapped and is going to be added to the next installment instead. Wouldn't mind hearing peoples opinions on the vore scenes, I try to go for a bit of variety and detail but I like many stories with quick non-explicit vore scenes in them as well.
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Posted by Vstar66 2 months ago Report
Awesome story i love permanent entrapment stories
Posted by kittywumpus 2 months ago Report
Thanks, I've always like the idea of growing a collection of prey that are stuck inside permanently
Posted by Dreadfulsmile 2 months ago Report
A little surprising Candy didn't try talking to Lulu at all. A bit odd given you'd likely want to know your pred. But really good story series in the making! Lets hope no feminine androids try and examine Lulu as well~
Posted by kittywumpus 2 months ago Report
I should've made a blurb about Candy trying to reach out to her predator and failing because it's too muffled but I just kinda glossed over it with the whole morning pleasure scene. Can't really write much dialogue that I've been satisfied with so everything is a little one sided but that will change eventually. Androids hadn't even crossed my mind but that could fit right into the sci-fi setting.
Posted by Dreadfulsmile 2 months ago Report
take my ideas and run with them. Could have them hunt her down for doing this, feed her to make sure the prey stay healthy, or gulp her and become a stasis pod for all of them. And the dialogue...i've been there with my writing. Just do your best and what your happy with, maybe a scene with prey talking with each other could work? Idk, take my ideas or ignore them, i'll just wait and enjoy the next installment anyways! Have a blessed night.