Posted by Shell 1 month ago Report

And so the carnage begins, with a tasty helping of vengeance for conning Heather's mother. With Gedeon being the first casualty. Ngl, I wasn't expecting the only male of the group to be the first to die AND to get obliterated into meat confetti... oh well.（。々°）
You reap what you sow, and the asshole and his sister sowed betrayal and death.

I will say I was impressed with the detail you put into Heather picking the lock to the vault and Adelaide explanation of "burning." I've tweeted this a bit ago, but a great story needs research into specific subjects and elements, even the fantasy. I'm sure you did quite a bit to flesh out not only Heather and Adelaide's personality, but also their professions. It's not an easy thing to accomplish as a writer, yet you did it with flying colors. ⸜(｡˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝♡

"This path you walk... vengeance. You will find no peace. I know."
In Heather's deadly idea of justice against the twins, Mabel was already sound of mind to think Heather betrayed them. And honestly, I think she's right to think that. She's put two other innocent lives in danger to kill the twins. Was she justified? Or did she just sign her own death warrant and everyone else's as well? ( ｡ •`ᴖ´• ｡)
I wonder what she'll find when she wakes up... (っº - ºς)

Posted by CaliTea 1 month ago Report

Next week we’ll see exactly what she finds when she wakes up :3