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The Long Haul 5: Mass
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The hammerspace bodysuit and mass vore finally come into play, this was the plan all along I was just debating how to write them in. In an alternate universe Lulu would have broken into Candy's room after devouring her, roots around her luggage and finds the bodysuit and some evidence that Candy was going to somehow wake up from stasis before everyone else and eat them herself. But instead I switched things up a bit by introducing Digit and making her the creator.
This story took forever this time, hopefully it's enjoyable.
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Posted by Calippya 1 month ago Report
Thank you for the story. Its a very fun series.
Posted by kittywumpus 1 month ago Report
Appreciate that, was originally just going to be a one off series but it feels like there's a lot more to explore so I kept going.
Posted by Eldritch1 1 month ago Report
You gotta wonder what it’s like inside her, now…
Posted by kittywumpus 1 month ago Report
Crowded heaven I would imagine, I'm scared to write any more internal scenes because I feel like I wouldn't be able to do it justice.
Posted by Eldritch1 1 month ago Report
Hey, you won’t get better without practice! I, for one, would love to see it!
Posted by kittywumpus 1 month ago Report
Yeah this whole series has basically been writing practice for me, lot of rewrites happen. I have some ideas so I'll have to see how well I can convey it into the story.
Posted by Rimedane 1 month ago Report
If you do, I recommend just focusing on one person and their surroundings inside her. Otherwise it will get out of hand, very quickly.
Posted by kittywumpus 1 month ago Report
I like to give a description for most of the preys but I only say the names of some of them to avoid getting out of hand like you said. Candy didn't get any mention this part but I do consider her to be the protagonist inside the protagonist, plus the previous internal parts revolved around her.
Posted by Shadeslayer48 1 month ago Report
This is such a great series, I can't wait to see what happens next
Posted by kittywumpus 1 month ago Report
Still a long way to go for the ship's journey, and a lot of passengers left...
Posted by Shadeslayer48 1 month ago Report
All destined to be eaten by lulu