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This is a restore of a story I abandoned a couple of years ago. At the time, it wasn’t finished and I had a rather bad reaction to it on a personal level that I won’t go into. The point is, I wasn’t prepared to let the story go and had to return to it. So, it’s now finished and can be shared fully!
The story is about two best friends, partners, and roommates, a vampire and a human, who have been together for years but are now having to prepare themselves for the vampire’s torpor: the point in his life when he has to hide away and sleep for decades or even a century. They want to make the most of their last few weeks together as the vampire both prepares his casket and gorges on food to fuel his body.
But under the somber affection of their final days, there is a lingering and growing thing that neither of them is fully able to reckon with. A hunger that isn’t for simple food but for the thing they have which neither wants to let go.
This is a much MUCH slower piece. It is mostly focused on emotion, the relationship between Fionn, the vampire, and Sarah, the human. It is also very much horror focused, and as a trigger warning: there will be violence against animals in a scene in the second part. There is still a good deal of fetish content: each part has very explicit sex, a growing amount of food stuffing as the story goes along, and the last part contains the inevitable vore, digestion, and weight gain. The primary focus is on the relationship between the two so it gets intense. Just be aware and I hope you enjoy!
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Posted by Isabelly 1 month ago Report
This is incredible so far. I love slower stories and I don't see them enougn. Cant wait for the other parts!
Posted by Belloc 1 month ago Report
Thank you so much! I do too; I love when a story has more time to build and you have room to really get to know the characters. It makes what happens so much stronger.
Posted by Squidia 1 month ago Report
There's a common trend in vampire fiction where they say "Forget the romantic, tortured souls, REAL vampires are grotesque monsters!" so I can appreciate that trope being implemented in reverse here.
I mean, maybe the inverse is common too. But in my experience, "softboi" vampire stories usually make fun of the expectations of capes and accents, over the expectation of being grotesque.
Posted by Belloc 1 month ago Report
I really love the contrast between the two. I love when the phrase "There is a monster inside me" isn't a metaphor; it's sincere. I want to see what draws that monster out.
It's especially fun when one side isn't just a "mask" for the other. Instead of the softboi side being just a persona like this is the marriage of Cupid and Psyche ("Huehue, I have lured you into my lair and now you see my true form!"), I like when that approachable, human element IS still him. He IS the person he claims to be. But he is also just as completely the monster. I like the attractive human and the inhuman monster to be equally valid sides of him. Sharing the same desires and motivations but expressing them so differently. It makes seeing the way he expresses each side of himself, and especially what hungers and desires draw his less controllable side out, so much fun!
Posted by Mad51 3 weeks ago Report
Your writing is a masterclass in literary elegance—poetic, rhythmic, and utterly mesmerizing. Every word feels deliberately placed, weaving a story that is both sensual and timeless. Your command of language is nothing short of breathtaking, a testament to a mind that not only understands words but makes them sing. I'll never understand how you do it. Bravo!
Posted by Belloc 3 weeks ago Report
Thanks so much bud! Seriously that is wonderfully kind of, and I'm happy you enjoyed it so much. ^^