So we have deviated from what I know from the story. but that is probably for the best since I have grown since I first had this wrote. So of course I am going to maybe try and grow the story a bit more.

So the full tour is in the next chapter redux rather than this one which was rather abrupt anyhow. Still abrupt but at least has a few thoughts than the simple mind I had back in the past.

Of course this may take time as it did this time around too.

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