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Tags: Ade (Nikke) Anis (Nikke goddess of victory) Belch Bready (Nikke) Burp burping up clothes burping up items Clothes Steal Crust (Nikke) Digestion F/F Female Pred Female Prey Goddess of Victory: Nikke Multiple Preys Naga (Nikke) Neon (Nikke) Non-fatal Oral Vore Rapi (Nikke) Reformation Soft Vore Struggling Tia (Nikke) Unwilling Prey Weight Gain writing written work
"Shortly after the events that transpired in the Cooking Oils kitchen, Bready and Crust decided to take a day off around the Outpost to unwind with Bready's newfound friend, Tia.
However, a crazy remark sprouts an even crazier idea in the head of our heroines which just might be the beginning of a somewhat unexpected turn of events..."
Hello all ! I certainly did not expect to be posting again so soon but, if you've kept up with NIKKE news, you know what happened. Bready happened. She's peak design, she is full to the brim ( heh ) with vorebait and extremely... Good, voicelines, let's say. And it's more than the voicelines. I would not be able to explain why she's so great in a few word but basically I got her a few days ago and learning about her landed her a pretty comfortable place in my mind. She's currently living in my head rent free.
So this story was more or less me indulging myself ! It stars Bready ( though Tia sees some good action as well ) who has quickly become one of my favourite NIKKEs, it is full with so many kinks and vorish ideas I find very attractive, some more common than others.
But more than that, this story I am very proud of. I tried new techniques to make my writing better, I think it is by far my best work as of yet, it is definitely my longest story so far ( standing over 11 000 words ! ) and I wanted to challenge myself to write this in record time and succeeded ! I managed to put this out in just over a day, and all of that makes this story quite the special accomplishment for me.
But this is beside the point. This story ( which was at first named "Bready's Taste Testing Disaster ( and the Voracious Misadventures of one Tia" but it didn't fit ) is my most exciting work, it's choke full of vorny goodness and hopefully, will make for a nice read. I am quite proud of how well I beat my vore block of writing full, blown out vore scenes. I hope you will all enjoy, I would be delighted to hear what you thought about this.
And lastly, a huge thank you to Newscout without whom this story wouldn't be what it is ! We brainstormed a lot of ideas together and it helped shape up this story into what you see. Thank you to them again.
I hope you enjoy this work of mine.
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Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 2 weeks ago Report
Nice, very nice
Posted by SuuLiv 2 weeks ago Report
Thank you very much ! I’m glad you enjoyed it !
Posted by DragonDerpxShadows 2 weeks ago Report
Thank you and Newscout coming together to make this masterpiece of a story. Always good to see fellow commanders. That aside, can’t wait for 2.5 and the poll winner! Either way love both Rapi and Cindy!
Posted by SuuLiv 2 weeks ago Report
Aw thank you very much ! Well, the writing is entirely my work, I wrote the story by myself, but they were definitely a huge help to get some specific ideas of what to actually write ! I’m happy you seemed to have enjoyed my work. Good to see fellow Commanders as well, especially on Eka. And we’re all waiting for the Anniv and the poll results I’d say, very exciting stuff
Posted by RachelBabe 13 days ago Report
I feel like I missed the part where Bready threw up their Brain Cases, without that they aint coming back~. But that's just me being a Nikke nerd!
Posted by SuuLiv 13 days ago Report
Yes, that part also had me thinking for a bit because it kinda needed to happen but I also didn’t want to make it explicit or anything to not really impact the mood of the story. The idea was that the procedure that Crust mentions is about removing the NIKKEs’ heads from inside the NIKKE that ate them. I didn’t go into details with it because it would be a pain to explain and wouldn’t bring a lot to this specific story in my mind ( though it would for worldbuilding, I should definitely add it in a later story in much detail !! ) I also did feel like the idea that the NIKKEs’ heads were floating somewhere inside Bready’s ( and Tia’s ) digestive tract was really quite attractive. So yes, thank you for asking because it allows me to explain what I had in mind without actually putting it in the story to avoid the potentially gnarly subject ( could still be brought up in a fun way but for this one story I decided to elude it ). Fun fact, New Scout even thought about the procedure actually being a NIMPH extraction, you extract the NIMPH from the body of the NIKKE that ate her to reform her ( and the NIMPH location on the NIKKE’s body would be signaled by a small tattoo of the digested NIKKE ) though I still wanted the idea to keep their brain intact for maximum lore and story accuracy. Still, thank you for asking and I hope you still enjoyed in spite of this not being put directly in the story !