Dazed and groggy, the mouse girl shook her head, feeling herself lying naked in a soft bed of hot thick strands of slippery rope-like material. There were squeaks and cries of alarm, and a loud slurping sound. *Squeak!* She was shaken to her senses, as the strands of pasta tightened round her middle and she was pulled up dangling in the air, her little feet kicking beneath her! She looked up to see the cat-queen's face, sharp teeth gleaming as those giant lips slurped up and nibbled at the pasta, pulling her higher and higher!
"Save yourself, Fae!" That was her friend, the white mouse girl and dignatory May, also naked and dangling above her, less than inch from the cat girl's lips. Save herself? Why Fae couldn't even free her arms as she dangled and bounced in the hot wet pasta. "Save your *SQUEmphhh!*" And that was the last Fae would ever see of Mae. The cat queen slurped her up like a large wet noodle; for a moment, the rounded rump stuck out of those lips, little legs kicking and tail twitching as frightened muffled squeaks emerged from the cat girl's jaw. Then there was a sickening *gulp!*. . . *gulp!* *gulp!*. Fae stared up to see those little legs and tail disappear as the cat queen closed her eyes, a look of bliss on her face, her throat expanding. . . . then contracting. Then the queen opened her eyes and grinned down at Fae, and began slurping and sucking up the pasta once again. "No no no no no no no" Fae muttered, trembling inspite of the hot pasta holding her, as she came closer and closer and closer to those giant lips.
I think you might have misunderstood my comment. I was just saying it was really good and you should think about writing more. That was all. However I know some artists can be picky about people using their work in any fashion, so I was just trying to play it safe.
*makes a note not to go to any Negotiations with those cats. . . Mouse Empire seems to have made a bad move, let hope the kingdom of mice do not make the same mistake. . . all and all vary well done
Posted by Shinnigami 16 years ago Report
*Sigh* every time we have these peace meetings, we end up having to get a whole new lineup of dignitaries and diplomats for the next time.
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Posted by Angel 16 years ago Report
You'd think these mouse-girls would know better than to try negotiating with a cat-girl...
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Posted by Aesir 16 years ago Report
Ya...But if they did, we wouldn't have this pic so...Yay for gullible mousegirls?
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Posted by Tabatha_Cat 16 years ago Report
*purrr!* *Tail-twitch!*
Mmmmm, very well indeed!
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Posted by Tabatha_Cat 16 years ago Report
Dazed and groggy, the mouse girl shook her head, feeling herself lying naked in a soft bed of hot thick strands of slippery rope-like material. There were squeaks and cries of alarm, and a loud slurping sound. *Squeak!* She was shaken to her senses, as the strands of pasta tightened round her middle and she was pulled up dangling in the air, her little feet kicking beneath her! She looked up to see the cat-queen's face, sharp teeth gleaming as those giant lips slurped up and nibbled at the pasta, pulling her higher and higher!
"Save yourself, Fae!" That was her friend, the white mouse girl and dignatory May, also naked and dangling above her, less than inch from the cat girl's lips. Save herself? Why Fae couldn't even free her arms as she dangled and bounced in the hot wet pasta. "Save your *SQUEmphhh!*" And that was the last Fae would ever see of Mae. The cat queen slurped her up like a large wet noodle; for a moment, the rounded rump stuck out of those lips, little legs kicking and tail twitching as frightened muffled squeaks emerged from the cat girl's jaw. Then there was a sickening *gulp!*. . . *gulp!* *gulp!*. Fae stared up to see those little legs and tail disappear as the cat queen closed her eyes, a look of bliss on her face, her throat expanding. . . . then contracting. Then the queen opened her eyes and grinned down at Fae, and began slurping and sucking up the pasta once again. "No no no no no no no" Fae muttered, trembling inspite of the hot pasta holding her, as she came closer and closer and closer to those giant lips.
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Posted by Aesir 16 years ago Report
Don't worry about what Ray said, I like that you wrote it :3
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Posted by Ray 16 years ago Report
I think you might have misunderstood my comment. I was just saying it was really good and you should think about writing more. That was all. However I know some artists can be picky about people using their work in any fashion, so I was just trying to play it safe.
No jack@ssery intended.
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Posted by Aesir 16 years ago Report
Oh, ok. That's fine then. :3 Sorry for the misunderstanding.
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Posted by Jnfly 16 years ago Report
*makes a note not to go to any Negotiations with those cats. . . Mouse Empire seems to have made a bad move, let hope the kingdom of mice do not make the same mistake. . . all and all vary well done
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Posted by Ray 16 years ago Report
Tabitha Cat, you need to get Tifa Lover's permission to write a story based on this pic.
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Posted by Aesir 16 years ago Report
It really doesn't bother me... ^_^; Adds to the pic if anything...
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Posted by Redatheart 16 years ago Report
I shall invade the mouse empire and claim all of it's land of the F.E!!! ( hint into stuff i'm having trouble upload)
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