Mousey panic in the final panel is very well done, as is the fox's expression in "Heh, that's cute".
The writing is improved in this one, too, although I don't think you can onomatopoeise "managed to sit up" ;) It seems to flow better, whereas the last one seemed to be a stream of individual statements in isolation.
Posted by Bright 15 years ago Report
Seems like mice are bad at planning ahead.
Posted by Tabatha_Cat 15 years ago Report
Yum!
Posted by Surge 15 years ago Report
Can't... read... text...
Posted by silverspec 15 years ago Report
Cute :3
Posted by Sehnsucht 15 years ago Report
Mousey panic in the final panel is very well done, as is the fox's expression in "Heh, that's cute".
The writing is improved in this one, too, although I don't think you can onomatopoeise "managed to sit up" ;) It seems to flow better, whereas the last one seemed to be a stream of individual statements in isolation.
The mage is a bit thick, isn't he?
Posted by Sparky_the_chu 15 years ago Report
poor mice X3
Posted by doodwtfomglol 15 years ago Report
She must eat them all! >:D