Posted by kimmyko2 15 years ago Report

Well I can tell you one thing...I request more of these please! Excellent twist!

Posted by Rhewin 15 years ago Report

So what if it had a linear plot, I liked it ^^. Kinda creepy how there was soft vore followed by hard vore in the tummy (well, I guess since he was already eaten it wasn't quite "vore"). I've never seen that before.

Posted by HipHugger 15 years ago Report

Yeah, I don't know what I was thinking. I'm not even into hard vore; I think it was one of those moments where you want something a little kinkier than you feel disgusted by yourself afterwards. *blush*

Posted by Rhewin 15 years ago Report

Haha, yep I know how that goes.

Posted by taito 15 years ago Report

I remember this story. ^_^

Posted by Catboy_Mahado 15 years ago Report

I remember this one! :3 Good times!

Posted by freak1000 15 years ago Report

not bad

Posted by Fragtagonal 15 years ago Report

Yes. The weird mix of soft and hard vore makes it different and irresistible. I'm glad I could read it again.

Posted by Demihunger 15 years ago Report

I believe in my mind this is the closest to how vore would works... Lovely story. :)

Posted by deoxys123 15 years ago Report

I love how it creates a picture of the little sister in your mind throughout the story.

Posted by the lone Drow 15 years ago Report

I fav this, that was awesome as always :D

Posted by pendingdelet02h623 14 years ago Report

normaly i like vore, and i like most of it, but this paragraph, "Yuri still rested on her knees, gazing down at the huge belly she had. As all of Ryo's body entered her stomach, her karate gi opened and her bare tummy stretched to its limits. She listened to the disgusting sounds of bones breaking and ribs snapping, feeling the pulse of blood warm the insides of her stomach as her brother's heart pumped it into her. Her stomach gurgled and grinded Ryo to a pulp within minutes, her brother quickly absorbed into her being." disgusted me. ive never seen or read bloody and gory/extra-painful seeming deaths in vore. thats just disgusting, i mean, bones being crushed and the bit about his heart!! >:( gross!!

Posted by HipHugger 14 years ago Report

I'll certainly keep your preferences in mind the next time I write a vore story.

Posted by Fragtagonal 14 years ago Report

Yeah, you really should consider cthuloid9's preferences in mind when you write, or even create anything ever!
On a side note, I can't believe you weren't gonna put this up! Everybody really likes it, you are a much better writer that you give yourself credit for.

Posted by kidclef 14 years ago Report

dis is awesome. are these chars based on some game or show? cuz they seem familiar

Posted by R_U_Snacksize 14 years ago Report

One of the best stories I have read in a long time!

Posted by R_U_Snacksize 14 years ago Report

PS If you ever feel like writing the 2nd chapter about how she gets the dojo :)

Posted by GinRyuKaza 11 years ago Report

I really liked this ^^

Posted by phantom 8 years ago Report

I really enjoyed this story, the perfect mix of soft vore and gory digestion in my opinion, and by far the best I have ever read. Sure it's a linear plot with a predictable outcome but sometimes those can turn out to be the most interesting. As is evident by this story in my opinion, please do a follow up on this story if you feel up to it, I really enjoy this style hiphugger

Posted by HipHugger 8 years ago Report

Thank you for the kind words!

Posted by phantom 8 years ago Report

You are more than welcome, i'm always glad to see content from you be it new or old, art or stories, they're all amazing in my opinion. Keep up the good work HipHugger, also i certanly wouldn't mind following yoyr name sake by getting hugged to your sultry succubus hips

Posted by R_U_Snacksize 6 years ago Report

Still one of my favorite stories of all time.

Posted by HipHugger 6 years ago Report

:)

Posted by R_U_Snacksize 6 years ago Report

:) Love the set up with the practice, the tickling, the surprise betrayal, the swallowing and the digestion. This story is one of the best IMHO.

Posted by HipHugger 6 years ago Report

Thank you so much!

Posted by R_U_Snacksize 6 years ago Report

You are most welcome. I should be thanking you for uploading such a great story.

Posted by theweirdone445 6 years ago Report

Legendary story~ Read this and loved it long before Yuri became my queen and fav girl of all time. It's only better now!

Posted by HipHugger 6 years ago Report

Thank you, fellow Yuri fan!