Posted by joeburp22181 13 years ago Report

Very detailed and enriching story. Thanks for putting forth so much effort in creating it. Haven't seen a good soft vore / unbirth story in months.

You have talent.

Thanks for the post as always,

joe

Posted by Wierdost 13 years ago Report

Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed it.

A lot of praise has to go the source material for giving me a good basis though. Still, I tried to inject with some interesting ideas.

Still, thank you for reading.

Posted by dragon32078 13 years ago Report

I loved this story, too, and would love to see more stories involving this woman. Her unexpected ability to make her prey horny is especially attractive, but even more so when combined with the ability to direct the prey to various body parts.

One idea I had in regards to creating a sequel is to have her devour a man, and become a futanari. Please let me know if you would be open to doing this.

Thanks again for the amazing story, and I look forward to reading more of your submissions.

Posted by Wierdost 13 years ago Report

Thanks, glad you enjoyed the story.

That is a good idea and I do intend on doing more stories involving these characters but sadly I don't think that is an idea I'd include. Nonetheless, thank you for the suggestion and I hope you enjoy my future instalments.

Posted by gtgod 2 years ago Report

Great story!
Loved the gooie pop digestion