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Jake the Devourer IV: A Slave for a Glutton
By Emperor_Palpatine -- Report
Uploaded: 12 years ago
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The thrilling next chapter to the Jake the Devourer series! Jake finds himself face to face with a survivor who's quite pleased with his handiwork.
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Posted by TW 12 years ago Report
I'll be honest, while its a great entry, seemed a tad rushed is all. :( Don't take it the wrong way. Just wam bam thank you maam. I like a little more plot. :p
Still, not trying to discourage, more of a personal taste... Keep up the good work.
Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 12 years ago Report
Were I a better writer, I'd have had a lot more plot. I wanted to put more meat on this, believe me. It's just that I wanted to bust out a quick chapter about regurgitating his new slave and to set up for his meeting with Mac and his girlfriend.
That will be the conclusion to Jake's story, I think, and I hope that it won't leave anyone disappointed.
Posted by TW 12 years ago Report
I await the finale then.
Posted by hdial002 2 years ago Report
Not the entire family you forgot the husband
Posted by hdial002 2 years ago Report
What happened to ami