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Brit Markov, desperate to regain some level of respectful scientific discourse, takes the HDTF on a field trip to a hospital.

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This is the first half of something that I didn't end up finishing in time to post. This weekend was when I was planning to finish it, but something came up, so now I'm putting up what I have, for fear of it getting shelved for who knows how long. I'll try to get the second half up tomorrow, but no promises.

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Groblek

Posted by Groblek 10 years ago Report

Nice! I quite like the hospital mishaps. I suspect the nurse at the end will be asking for some hazard pay after that one. :). Though with the pleasurable side effects, at least the complaints shouldn't be too loud.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

Thanks! The "infant accidentally eating her mother" bit was suggested by a reader, by the way.

RLord4268

Posted by RLord4268 10 years ago Report

You've done it again. Honestly, completely objectively, my favorite series ever. The HDTF series checks every box I've ever even thought I had. Bravo. I can't wait to see part 2. I'll be waiting, patiently excited.

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

Thanks! I'll do my darnedest to get the second half out before bed.

Hopter

Posted by Hopter 10 years ago Report

That'S Perfect! My breath caught when I read it. No one has yet to come up with anything like this, you're the only one. Are you planning to write a sequel to the story of a mother inside her baby?

marloweny

Posted by marloweny 10 years ago Report

This idea was actually a request/suggestion. And it has been requested that I do one with more detail, so perhaps I'll do so. I'm very happy you liked it.

Hopter

Posted by Hopter 10 years ago Report

Ok. I'll wait. In this story, a great perspective to continue.