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Dawn Starts her quest of making Ash all hers by attacking Misty and Misty is not the only person who gets eaten

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Posted by Drakira 9 years ago Report

I do like the concept of this story, but the dialogue is a bit mashed together. Quotation marks may help alleviate that. Other than that, I hope you continue until Serena is a candy girl like your namesake.

Posted by Apostolos 9 years ago Report

Much easier to read now, thank you...

Posted by Rashdolphin 9 years ago Report

So its the "'dawn' of buu" huh ;)

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