i feel tricked sir but i guess it was mostly my own fault for not looking at the tags first. at the beginning of the story Fluttershy made it sound like it was some sort of non-fatal digestion story which it clearly is not. next time try to keep things consistent. it just feels like this was too different stories that got slapped together.
Letting the human turn into her cum is kind of out of character for Fluttershy, that being said I think there should be an alternative ending to the story where Twilight Sparkle uses her magic to restore the human's body
Posted by b300mussolini 9 years ago Report
i feel tricked sir but i guess it was mostly my own fault for not looking at the tags first. at the beginning of the story Fluttershy made it sound like it was some sort of non-fatal digestion story which it clearly is not. next time try to keep things consistent. it just feels like this was too different stories that got slapped together.
Posted by supersaiyango 9 years ago Report
Ill take the load.
Posted by TimerSmith 9 years ago Report
Its all yours, you just have to take it from her. Just be careful, you might end up in a cream bath
Posted by supersaiyango 9 years ago Report
heh not gonna happen. Im hardly a baseline human." I say wrapping my lips around her cock
Posted by TimerSmith 9 years ago Report
But what if Shy gives you the puppy dog eyes with "p-please...... I don't want to be alone", with a small sniffle and lone tear falling from her eyes.
And even then she may 'slip'
Posted by supersaiyango 9 years ago Report
Let's see teleportation, Healing factor, Blasting my way out... Take your pic for why I wouldn't be cumjested
Posted by VoreLover9012 9 years ago Report
Letting the human turn into her cum is kind of out of character for Fluttershy, that being said I think there should be an alternative ending to the story where Twilight Sparkle uses her magic to restore the human's body
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 8 years ago Report
If that load is as delicious as the story is, I wouldn't mind, even with the cumgestion risk (heck, if it was a couple years ago, I'd volunteer).