g4 :: A Rare Treat [M/F] by Grick

It occurred to me that I have never written AV. That has been rectified.

I am new at writing this form of vore, so please feel free to post any criticism you might have. If I draw too much or too little attention one way or the other, it would be helpful to know.

Also, I am now taking requests in the interest of trying out new things and better understanding the fetish. If you have any requests or suggestions for future stories, feel free to voice them in the comments or to send me a PM.

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Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

I'm always happy to see male harpy preds, but I have to say, the way that you wrote the AV in particular intrigued me. I've never really known where I stood with it, but you definitely drew me in with the way that you depicted it.

You describe and flesh out the characters very well, too. I enjoyed this a lot. :) Very nice work.

Posted by Grick 8 years ago Report

Much appreciated!

Until recently, I also had no strong inclination towards AV. I had always seen it associated with scat or scentplay, which I tend to dislike. However, several people contributed advice on how to best depict clean AV, and this story is an amalgamation of their suggestions. I was afraid it would end up too cynical, but I'm glad you liked the way it came out.

Posted by Chameleonette 8 years ago Report

That was pretty much my feelings about AV, too. Haha. So I guess we're on the same wavelength there. Never have tried to write it myself, but I think you did a good job with it here. My opinion on that matter probably won't hold much water, though, since I'm not terribly familiar with it. But the story was definitely enjoyable.

Posted by Sauvegarde 1 year ago Report

I love the atmosphere and attention to details <3

I wonder if this little harpy boi acted all meek at first because he thought Davia was a female of his kind.

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