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Family Affait pt 2
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Part 2/3 of the family affair commission.
Last time we left Jackie she'd eaten her father and he now permanently resides on her chest. After explaining this to her mother things left off on a strangely erotic note between them and Jackie was instructed to get a job.
In this meaty continuation Jackie finally finds the perfect job for her and her mother decides where she's going to steer the family. Jackie's antics may derail her plans though as always.
Main form of vore is unbirth the rest happen in passing mostly.
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Posted by Magaso 8 years ago Report
Aw, I was hoping Jackie would end up turning the tables
Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report
Thaaaaaaaats Showbiz!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 8 years ago Report
Yeah, me too. Actually, when Veronica started double-fisting her, I was almost expecting her to do something like that on accident.
I always have trouble with stories like these, just because the abuse and degradation flavor of dominance really isn't my thing. But seeing and reading the prey eating up and loving how they're being treated? That's my thing. So this sort of story has a fun turn-on turn-off roller-coaster effect on me, that I'm still not sure if I love or hate.
It was a fun read. I especially liked the casual inclusion of the camera woman near the end, and the blatant seduction that got her to abandon potential loyalties to her other involvements.
I actually wonder,... if despite her probably arousal at being informed of what happened to her daughter,... Barbara is going to be genuinely pissed that it happened without her being involved? That her daughter went and got herself digested like this instead of being HER prey, or vice versa. And that someone tricked her into it.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 8 years ago Report
Find out in the exciting conclusion! Coming your way... sometime...
The abuse and degradation doesn't really come naturally to me honestly. I like my dominance a slightly softer flavor. But it isn't distasteful to me and as a commission I try to go with what I think the commissioner is yearning for. So dems the breaks.
I'll have to file away that idea of vorno prey turning the tables for another time though, sounds like a fun one.
Posted by Groblek 8 years ago Report
Yeah, add me to the list of people who was hoping for a turnabout in that scene. But I understand the nature of commissions.
Posted by DestinyLust 8 years ago Report
I very much have to agree on the roller coaster sentiment. I have to admit that I had to walk away for a minute when Jackie signed the contracts like an absolute bimbo. But through the ups and downs it's still quite a good story! Well done as always Ryan.
Posted by Cryos 8 years ago Report
Amazing work, as usual! Always makes my night to see you upload something :3
Posted by JustTroy 8 years ago Report
Man I was really liking the direction this way taking before the whole "vorno" thing came into the picture...
Posted by MrPhoton 8 years ago Report
That took an unexpected but interesting turn, can't wait to see part three now.