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“Are you sure about this Jason?” Alex asked as he made his way through the cave followed by his two friends. Despite the warm night, he swore he could see his breath with how much this place was giving him the chills. The soft white ears of the bunny swayed as he looked back at the smiling brown deer right behind him, followed by the soft blue glow of Ruvaak’s nose and the brighter red of her eyes before the glowing red orbs moved over to peer back into the bunny’s. Quickly looking back in front of him Alex gasped to himself as he lead the group through an open doorway in the cave they had all found themselves in as part of a bet with a group of their other friends.

The bunny turned off the light as they came into the main room of the cave that had enough moonlight to show the primary goal of their visit. The stone altar stood in the middle of the room ominously. Hearing a whistle behind him, Alex turned to see Jason picking up his camera to snap a picture of the stone table basking in the middle of the circular room. Noticing the three other tunnels, he guessed there was one in each cardinal direction leading away from the table. He made his way around as he shifted his focus to the deep and rough runes carved into its side.

“So they weren’t shitting us!” Jason said with a laugh, breaking the silence as he dropped his camera after taking a picture of the dimly lit altar in the middle of the room. letting it fall down onto the loose baggy tee shirt that he had on over his cargo pants.

Alex’s ears went back as he felt his heart pounding a bit in his loose shirt as his short fur started to stand a bit. Being here would be bad enough if they were not here Jason’s other friend, a demon no less, and they take her to a place like this. As much as Alex had felt he had gotten along with Ruvaak over the years, he prefered it to be in well-lit public places.

Lost in thought, Alex stared at the table so hard that he barely noticed the glow of the table. Ruvaak ran a large paw over the table as she closed her red eyes, taking a deep breath before opening her eyes, blue pupils now glowing in the middle of the red eye.

Jason smiles as he got another picture, making sure to get a shot of the tiger with her paw on the stone altar, the runes around the table that had been merely etched in the stone were now glowing the same blue glow as her skin as well as the unusual pupils. Moving the camera down, the deer smiled a bit.

“So it’s the real thing?” Jason said to her as he watched while she started to pull off her shirt, showing her long soft fur that covered her large dark chest and the blue glow of the nipples that poked through.

Ruvaak nodded with a smile that showed off her long fangs as her lengthy blue tongue slid over her lips. “Yeah, I can hear it speaking to me. It’s real.” The tiger demon said as she started to work off her pants and panties, letting them hit the floor in a pile under her.


“W...woah! W...what is going on here!” Alex said as she finally took his eyes off the altar long enough to see his newly naked friend. His eyes wandering over the crimson markings in her dark fur that lead in to her grey belly. The bunny’s ears moving back as he felt his heartbeat starting to pick up for the first time of the night for a reason other than fear.

“She kinda does this sometimes.” Jason said as he moved over next to the smaller male, putting his arm around him. “Like when she gets to a overly spiritual place, especially one as unholy as this.”

Looking back over to the demon as she started to crawl onto the table, Alex gulped loudly, watching her large paws moving over her large chest as the cat’s legs opened. Seeing the blue glow of the demon’s vagina made his cheeks start to burn as hard as the tent in his pants. Some of the thick blue goo started to ooze from the soft lips before one of her fingers worked down her belly, the tiger’s fingers rubbing over the soft skin. Moaning softly, Ruvaak let out a deep purr that felt like it was vibrating the very air around the conflicted bunny.

He watched her fingers starting to slide in and out of the wet sticky lips as the other finger rubbed over her hard nipple. The tiger moaned on the table, her hips rolling a bit as she let out another soft moan, her finger starting to move faster and her breath grew quicker as wet slick slaps start to fill the air, her fingers starting to press into the soft skin faster and faster. Sliding her paw up to rub over her clit, Ruvaak let out a loud moan as her paws moved over to grip the altar as it started to glow brighter.

Laying down for a moment, a wide grin moved over the demon’s lips as her friends felt the temperature drop in the room. Taking another picture Jason lowered his camera to look around. Both his breath and Alex’s was visible in the now cold air, the room growing darker as it seemed like the moonlight focused on the altar in the middle.

Ruvaak’s eyes opened wide as the glowing blue tongue slid over her lips, and from all directions ghostly figures walked through the open doors as she sat up. Looking at one of them, her maw opened wide, letting her long blue tongue slide out as she took a deep breath. The ghostly figure of a raccoon that had been standing there started to stretch into what looked like some kind of blue fluid that rushed into her open mouth.

The blue glow from the ghost made its way down her throat and into her growing belly. As the last of the light disappeared into her throat, she closed her mouth, licking over her lips with a smile. A paw rubbed over the soft fur on her belly as she licked her lips, and a faint blue glow could be seen as she looked over the other side as the remaining three figures stood still, the expression on their faces stoic as her mouth opened for the next one.

She looked into the face of the badger that stood there, his expression unchanging as it’s pulled into the glowing mouth of the demon. The spectral body turned into goo as the demon’s throat bulged out and flattened repeatedly as the ghost slid down Ruvaak’s open maw. Her mouth closed after the last of him worked down into the large belly that began to shift with unnatural light.

Alex’s heart was nearly beating out of his chest as he watched the demon lay back down on the altar. As she laid on her back, he couldn't help but watch as the large grey stomach grew as the ghost whose face he had not even had time to looked at filled the growing stomach.

Ruvaak sat up with a smile as she looked past her two friends. Her tongue slid over her soft lips as she opened her glowing mouth one final time, her friends now having a perfect view of the soft blue inside of her mouth. Every detail of the thick slick flesh was clear as her saliva oozed down the glowing blue flesh. Her throat opened as a trail of blue started to make its way inside from behind them. Then, something made Alex’s heart skip a beat. He felt a light tug from himself as he looked down at his own paws, seeing what looked like blue goo soaking out of his fur as it gets pulled into the open maw of the tiger. Looking over to Jason, Alex’s breath grows quicker as he sees the same blue goo flowing from his friend as well. Looking back over to the open maw as he hears a click from Jason’s camera, Alex stares in awe and horror as her throat ripples over the three souls that all work down into her massive stomach together. As he feels the last of the strange goo leave his fur, her mouth closes with a wide grin.

Laying back on the table, Ruvaak rested her head in one of her paws, looking down at her huge glowing belly as it gurgled loudly and shifted over the six souls deep inside. Her tongue slid over her lips once more as Jason snapped another picture of the happy demon looking over her stomach as her mouth opened. Jason looked at the slick flesh in terror, wondering what could happen next before seeing the flesh ripple as a loud belch filled the stone room. Flecks of blue goo flew out to the floor in front of her and she gave a soft sigh as her mouth closed to give another lick to her wet lips while her stomach gurgled louder over the large meal.

Alex jumped at the sound of the belch, watching the rippling flesh making him fall backwards. Scrambling up to his feet as soon as he remembered he could move, Alex moved over to grab Jason by the shirt as he put down his camera.

“What…..what the fuck!” Alex said as he panted hard, his heart pounding in his chest as he looked into the deer’s eyes. “What just happened!”

Jason looked down at the panicked bunny with a shrug. “I think we both know what just happened. Prolly should have moved, but I had to get the best shot! That was amazing: I’ve never seen anything like it!.”

Alex shook his head, taking a step back from the deer, looking over him over to the distended, shifting belly of the tiger. Her mouth opening for another loud belch as Jason took up his camera for another picture. Alex kept shaking his head as he looked back to the exit of the cave, starting to make his way out as he took a deep shaky breath, trying to process what just happened as he walked away. The sounds of the tiger’s stomach echoed in the halls as he made his way out of the cave.

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