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Finally making a eka debut, in this story a unlucky young mail pony has a rather gurgly encounter with a peculiar type of changeling.
This story is based off of a RP done with the fantastic fellow pone writer/artist MightyShockwave. Bonus shout-out to GollyGeeWhiz for helping clean up the grammar.
Expect to see more of this predatory bug and his friends in the near future!
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Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 8 years ago Report
Bug ponie best ponie
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Posted by CaptainMoke 8 years ago Report
Great first impression! This hits all of my buttons. Especially changelings. Looking forward to more from you!
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Posted by ChangelingWil 8 years ago Report
Nice, but the formatting makes a tad hard to read. Could do with, ah, some spacing between the paragraphs.
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Posted by Change 8 years ago Report
that’s cool story, you did a nice job/ ^w^
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