Posted by VoreWriterintheSky 7 years ago Report

Ah, yes! Truly, this story is nothing more than what it claims to be. And you know what, that's all right!

In a world where everyone is always looking for subversions of trends and disregarding classical works, it is quite pleasing to find a simple tale such as this. No fetishes, no tantalizing scenarios, nothing that would arouse a reader's lust. Instead, you have provided a story that goes back to the familiar, safe territory. A story of an ordinary knight, on a classic adventure! Slaying dragons and saving princesses! Why, other stories may have had that same princess end up as a hot pile of shit after an incredibly enjoyable digestion and disposal scene! But that would be ridiculous and far too beyond the norm for such a normal story as this!

Long story short: a very pleasant, ordinary read, that in no way excited me by appealing to some dreadful fetishes I may have.

And I'll stop being silly for a moment. This is incredibly well done! I enjoyed it quite a lot. Thanks so much for putting the time in to craft this piece

Posted by TETRO 7 years ago Report

Thanks! :P

I had a lot of fun writing it. Once I have some sort of goofy premise to work off of, I can really get carried away writing it.

I'm thinking of writing more with these characters in the future. I'm sure there are quite a few vore-related shenanigans they could get into.

Posted by Nalzindar 7 years ago Report

A funny story with an interesing twist. Nice to see that the ordinary damsel in distress tale can be remade into something new and fresh. I may not be the biggest fan of disposal around here, but I enjoyed your story very much nevertheless, it was both funny and not so little sexy at the same time.
The start of a beautiful...and intimate friendship between a *knight* and a dragon. Maybe you can give them another adventure together? Who knows how many beautiful princesses and maidens it is out there who doesn't deserve the usual rescue^^
Keep up the good work.

Posted by TETRO 7 years ago Report

Thank you very much for the encouragement! I've already begun to work on another story about them. We'll have to see where it all leads. I have ideas in mind of what sort of world they live in and what kind of goals they might have. What sort of destiny does this strange little pair have? Will Corren finally be put to justice for his crimes agaist royalty? Who or what will they eat next? Not even I can say for certain.

Posted by Philosoraptor 5 years ago Report

Great little "knight, dragon and princess" story, well written, and with plenty of good description. I could see this being a start to popular series save for the absurdity of a human swallowing another human, which even the average five year old could not take seriously. I was able to enjoy the story though by simply imagining the (full sized) dragoness eating the princess instead. Now I understand the mentality behind "The Bait that Bites Back" and the woman's ability to swallow a dog sized dragon. That story still worked, imagining the Lich's spell turned her into a full sized dragon for the purpose to have sex with his master, but she decided to eat him instead. It would also negate the inexplicable plot of the Lich shrinking his dragon master (Being magical creatures themselves, that also seemed highly unlikely of succeeding). Reptiles DO have the kind of anatomy that would allow them to swallow virtually same sized prey, as we see with real reptiles like Komodo dragons and snakes. But people choke to death every day if they don't carefully chew a bit of hot dog. Hope you tweak both of these so they would be more plausible to the mainstream fantasy audience that expects dragons to eat people, but not knights that swallow princesses, and women that swallow dragons the size of dogs. With your talent you'd really have something going then. Thanks for sharing!