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Max and Julienne are just finishing up their preparations for a highly-anticipated visit from one of Max's old highschool buddies, when they receive a phone call from the man himself. Max's friend asks if a last-minute guest could attend the party as well, and Max agrees, wondering just who this mysterious visitor will be.
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Posted by Marked 7 years ago Report
Awesome job! I really liked the effort you put into word choice. I hope it was well-received by the commissioner.
Posted by TootCore 7 years ago Report
Pretty fantastic story. The casualness of the vore is really done well.
Posted by BardicLasher 7 years ago Report
That was fun and just the right level of surreal. Max seems so confused right to the end.
Posted by enigmanigmatic 7 years ago Report
I mean, I like the casual nature, and I love the details. I really love this story. The only issue I normally have with casual vore is the fatal side. But I can pretty much forgive that in this well written story.
Posted by venomousdreams 7 years ago Report
There is casual vore and then there is way too casual vore. The only way the wife could be this casual about being eaten while pregnant is if there is reformation tech we don't know about.
Posted by Plgc 7 years ago Report
Why try to rationalize something so sexy?
Posted by ifdre 5 years ago Report
What is the fate of Julienne? Will she be digested? And what is the purpose of her struggling?