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One year after the events of The Hungry Ninja, Marunomi finds herself with a lengthy prison sentence that may not last for long.
Welp, here it is, the sequel to The Hungry Ninja, featuring the voracious Marunomi. Honestly, I always wanted to do a follow-up to it and show Marunomi chowing down on more Kunoichi, but couldn't come up with a coherent plot until fairly recently. And, well, here we are!
The story isn't finished yet, but I will be uploading a few more chapters that have been finished over the next few days. Once again, these are first drafts that haven't been proofread, but I hope you'll enjoy them regardless. Thanks for reading!
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Posted by BlueMarvel611 7 years ago Report
Hey Nobodyman, long time no see. It's been a long while since I saw you do something with Marunomi. Personally I think that she was my most favorite fan created vore predator ever. Especially given how she was inspired by the Power Rangers monster. That said though seeing you put up a sequel to Marunomi's exploits would be a pleasure for me and others to enjoy. Here comes my review.
Okay I'll be honest for yes there are some spelling and grammar errors I see on some sentences. It was rushed for the most part but from what I'm seeing this is starting to get good. Just keep it slow on your part for the next few chapters and they'll turn out really good for the readers.
Now for the start of the story itself. Wow, just over a year since she was given life imprisonment and Marunomi's literally wasted to nothing save for a few meager meals. In a way I almost can't help but feel sorry for her. Pity even if not for her female jailer. Said jailer so deserves to make Marunomi suffer for devouring her fiance a long while back...but boy would there be a bad case of irony here. To think that Marunomi would be able to escape just by eating a rat would help gain the boost she needed...not just that but Jailer's own case of wanting revenge was also her great opportunity. Got to say that it's really not smart of said Jailer to enter the room just to get a few hits in on Marunomi...for she just ended up as chow for that ninja. Especially one who had long been depraved of a huge feast. To this end, looks to me said Jailer got to be reunited with her husband...in the belly of the beast.
Now that she's free, seems to me she's after revenge at the girls who she nearly ate...I wonder who would be first? Or who she would eat considering this is brand new fanfiction all together. I would like to see how this turns out. Despite it being a first draft I can tell that this would be an amazing fanfiction to read. Keep up the good work, Nobodyman.
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel
Posted by Nobodyman 7 years ago Report
Awesome! Thanks for the review!
Posted by almindore58 7 years ago Report
Didn't think u had a sequel in mind. Way to go, Dude!