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Requested by IronJager. Tom finally gets the chance to pursue the fantasies of his youth. Can he impress his childhood crush?
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Posted by Assimilation 7 years ago Report
I try to give productive comments, but OH MY GOD THIS WAS AMAZING HOLY SHIT WHAT A RIDE ALL OF MY EMOTIONS ARE PEAKED YOU ARE THE BEST thank you for sharing your writing with us. =)
Posted by Tyslan03 7 years ago Report
That is a productive comment, I love feedback in any form. Thank you for the continuous support and encouragement.
Posted by crumplim 7 years ago Report
Awesome work man, possibly a sequel??? (;
Posted by Tyslan03 7 years ago Report
Who would he feed to her now?
Posted by crumplim 7 years ago Report
As many people as it takes to keep him alive
Posted by IronJager 4 years ago Report
I’d love to see that ????
Posted by Sycamore 3 years ago Report
Man, I fucking adore this story. Every single moment is perfect and fucked up; I loooove innocent, undeserving prey!
God, the scene with Beth is fucking perfection - you've got so much about her personality and looks established in just a few lines, so she feels like a real person, and then the fucking betrayal, and suddenly we're watching a cute, innocent girl slowly descend down a pred's throat for ultimately no purpose other than sexual gratification... Introduced and developed in just a short span, and then ripped away immediately, just like her future.
That scene alone is incredible, I love it <3