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Twilight wants to impress Flash Sentry, and she comes up with a quick solution to attracting a stallion. But books don't always have the answers and Spike tags along as she gets her friends to help her...
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Posted by Koopabrony32 7 years ago Report
Good stuff
Posted by Battle541 7 years ago Report
I would love to see more Princess Twilight Sparkle as a pred.
Posted by joshfang96 7 years ago Report
Extra thicc!
Posted by dddddd2 7 years ago Report
Nice~ That's our princess.
Posted by takugenji 7 years ago Report
... The implied Fatality makes me dislike this story. Also the fact that she apparently failed in her research isn't that great of a point. I feel that you tried to go way too fast with this as well. The writing is okay and all but most of the characters don't sound like themselves. And I mean Twilight and Spike don't sound like themselves. They can literally be replaced by any character it seems... Then again, continue writing because people only get better when they continue.
Posted by Neoar2000 6 years ago Report
Now this is fucking hot <3
Posted by SirTagsAlot 3 years ago Report
So, I seem to distinctly remember someone wrote a fan sequel/extension of this story on this site, that included reformation.
Anyone know what happened to that/where it is?