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Love's Weight
By DestinyLust -- Report
Uploaded: 7 years ago
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This... is not perfect. I meant to go greater in detail and enhance the romance and lovey-dovey stuff. But y'know what it's mostly the story I set out to write and I got it on 'paper', which is better than I've managed most of the time lately.
Enjoy as Lorna and Coryn become closer than ever, and Demi finally writes a story between two adults lol. This one is... A tiny bit less specific on fatality, I guess Lorna probably *could* let Coryn out. Not for a while though~
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Posted by AegisOfRoses 7 years ago Report
This was great, fast and to the point with a quick after credits that's summed the piece nicely! If I could only pick one thing to add, it would he dialogue, it would certainly expand on the care these two felt for each other. Other than that it was great! ^_^
Posted by Scion 7 years ago Report
I hope she is polygamous and decides to add others !
Posted by DestinyLust 7 years ago Report
Perhaps~ Though, she's already on the massive side, anyone else and she'll have trouble walking :P
Though, you're probably thinking of polyamory. Polygamy involves y'know actually marrying someone and not turning them into a cock :V
Posted by Scion 7 years ago Report
What is marriage if not a permanent one sided joining :p
Well, depending on the setting - she could just gain their strength and other special qualities, Ive never really pondered the practical issues one has when incorporating other people into sexy women
lol
Posted by rugli 5 years ago Report
You could always go for rewrite if you feel you can improve on this :)
other wise lovely
Posted by Valorie 2 years ago Report
Awww, I like this one.