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A growing desire Pt 3 By xxsameoldxx -- Report

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Jax and Markus finally make it to the show, but just what will happen there?

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zidanes123

Posted by zidanes123 7 years ago Report

Jax and Markus' deaths wer ekidna rushed and, mid way you stopped describing the species of the males who offered themselves.

Other than that it was a good trilogy

JaxCane

Posted by JaxCane 7 years ago Report

As the commissioner, I wanted them to be swift as that is something I enjoy. The idea of having been find and dandy one moment and then in the belly the next. I'm greatly pleased with the results. :)

boomer91

Posted by boomer91 7 years ago Report

Love love love these stories, but I have to agree that the Jax and Markus parts were way too rushed. Shouldve been epic :P
But a great world and great twists and turns.