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So I guess it's a bit late to be posting this, but after the incredible fifth episode of FLCL Progressive, which was practically a love letter to us vore fans, I've really been wanting to write a story about it. But...well, for whatever reason, I could just never get in the mood to write it until now.
Anywho, this is basically just a quick vignette, detailing what may have been going through the characters' minds during the events of episode 5. Didn't really take the characters or story in any new wild directions with this, but I hope you'll still enjoy it. Feel free to let me know what you think!
Oh yeah, and incidentally, FLCL Alternative premiers tonight! I personally don't have high hopes about there being any more vore (the first episode doesn't have it at least), but you never can tell.
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Posted by BlueMarvel611 6 years ago Report
Hey Nobodyman. Welcome back for it's been a while. Now I already reviewed your pic of Kalia from your awesome story...now to review this one.
Got to say that you really know how to shift character views in this one. From Haruko's thoughts all throughout the event of her digesting her other half to Jinyu who was resisting the best she could. Mostly on Jinyu's thoughts as she was a floating consciousness that's been within Haruko's body resisting the full digestion. It does capture some aspects of the FLCL Alternative episodes that you talked about too. I am so going to rewatch episode 5 for the anime.
All in all you did good work for this short story, NB. I can't wait to see more works like this come from you in the future. Mostly on your other unfinished story series too. So laters and keep up the good work.
Elias Azule
The Blue Marvel
Posted by FLCLlover1997 1 year ago Report
Great story, but I'd have loved it even more if you'd included Haruko pooping Jinyu's remains out!