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It's been a week since Rarity ate Applejack, and her friends are preparing for their imminent ingestion. She decides to have a typical spa day with Fluttershy, but she gets quite the surprise from the shy pegasus...
Sorry it took longer to write this than I predicted everyone, hope you enjoy this as much as the previous! Try to guess who comes next! (Not that I'll spoil who...)
Edit: I have changed the flushing scene as I realize it contradicts other information in the story, my apologies to you all.
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I of course own nothing other then this story, the characters and world being the property of Hasbro.
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Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
Absolutely worth the wait! The slower pace really worked for me, expanding on all the things I loved about the last chapter-the casualness, the heartfelt conversations, repeated references to how the prey will soon be poop... Loved it! Also haha at Flutteshit being shy about being flushed :p
As for who's next: my guess is Rainbow : )
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
Glad you liked it, I took as much time with each piece as I could. I thought that would be funny, and it's also a reference to one of Hermlover's removed works where a little girl eats her big brother and she teases his remains similiarly when he won't flush immediately. That, and it's more realistic since a dump large enough to coil up would take more flushes, even with the extra space in Rarity's toilet! (I teeter on Fridge Logic, ugghh...).
Posted by AlbanyExpression 6 years ago Report
I also like to image each new mane 6 member who gets flushed down Rarity's toilet ends up together in one big pile :)
Posted by Twisty22 6 years ago Report
I almost forgot about this. Great stuff!
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
Glad to see my work has recaptured you.
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
Yay I love seeing more with rarity as the predator like this. There isn't enough of it.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
That was part of the reason I decided to do this series.
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
I know. I don't understand how I wasn't watching you. I love your work. Quick question though. Are you likely to do more pony vore and disposal stories after this series? I would love to see you continue to make amazing content.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
Oh, I intend to do plenty more of that darling. It is my biggest fetish after all...
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
Yay. Will it be mares only or will the stallions occasionally get a chance to shine? You know other than as a steamy shiny pile in a toilet.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
Oh, I intend to give stallions their fair shot.
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
Sweet. Wish I could help by giving proof reads or something.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
If you can do it for free I'd be happy to let you look over my work. Also, I think you'll really like one of the stories I'll submit soon...
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
Yeah I would do it for free.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
Alrighty then. Next serious work I've got, I'll let you proofread it.
Posted by whitpey 6 years ago Report
Sweet
Posted by donutbrittle 6 years ago Report
These just keep getting better and better.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 6 years ago Report
I know right? Glad you lie it.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 5 years ago Report
Yes of course, I am working on it, along with a lot of other things. Things are slow for the near-future, but don't fret, it will come.
Posted by coolbreeze 3 years ago Report
Hi. I am enjoying these. I know it has been some time since you wrote it, but I do want you to know that there is still interest from people who would like to see more.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 3 years ago Report
Oh I know that people are still interested, I assume that with my work in general (and I myself have plenty of stories I read that no matter how long they haven't been touched, I'm still interested). With this series in particular, I assume it's pretty much the main draw people have towards me, since the first story is my most favorited one!
I appreciate your feedback, and I promise I am working on and will have it out at some point, hopefully soon. Part of the problem, which I've expressed in my blogs, is that I've had to re-write everything a few times on top of me being massively behind schedule on a lot of other things for the past couple years.
Posted by coolbreeze 3 years ago Report
I understand that life happens and that you can't just crank out these stories. I do appreciate what you do, and whenever you do continue this series is not as important as the notion that it will be continued with the same good style that you have put into the previous parts. So, thank you.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 3 years ago Report
Everybody has been a dear about the whole time, and I appreciate you all for it. Keeping in line with my previous quality is part of the reason I've been re-writing, as I realized a while back I kind of...got way too over-complicated in the future of the stories. I had that issue with this story too but I managed to fix it easily then.
Posted by Vorachist22 3 years ago Report
Excellent work.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 3 years ago Report
Thank you, hopefully I can get to finishing the next chapter done, either this month, or within the next couple, since it's one of the stories I am focusing on trying to finish at the moment.
Posted by BrightGarden 2 years ago Report
Do you have any plans on making chapters for Twilight and Rainbow Dash? I would love to see that.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 2 years ago Report
Yes, I have plans to to do that, and have been trying to get the Rainbow Dash one finished since this one was concluded. I have plans to do more after that, but we'll get there when we get there...
Posted by coolbreeze 1 year ago Report
I am really looking forward to it.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 1 year ago Report
I'm glad, and hopefully I can finally get it finished. That story continues to be such a tough nut to crack for me...
Posted by coolbreeze 1 year ago Report
I understand. It's a good story, one that needs to be done right. The other person mentioned chapters for Rainbow Dash and Twilight, but I assume there will be one for Spike as well? Since Rarity asked for him to come to the meeting too with the others, she wants to eat him as well. And if so, that's a chapter that I am looking forward to. He's loved her since he met her, so becoming a part of her would be so special.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 1 year ago Report
Hmmm, I won't spoil anything, but yes, Spikey-wikey is going down Rarity's gullet as well.
Posted by coolbreeze 1 year ago Report
That's what I wanted to hear. Thank you.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 1 year ago Report
Welcome!
Posted by AugustBebel 1 year ago Report
*Happy Rarity noises*
Need more of Ra eating everyone in such a well written way
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 1 year ago Report
Your comment brings me so much joy!
I'm glad you find this so well written, and are enjoying it, since I enjoy your work so much.
Posted by Bradyradtke 1 year ago Report
Where’s number 1. I know 2 and 3 are here
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 1 year ago Report
Did you check the description of the second story, I think I linked it in there...