Posted by rugli 6 years ago Report

Wouldn't mind a willing version of this.

Posted by ConcordantOpposition 6 years ago Report

If James were willing you would end up with a completely different story

Posted by rugli 6 years ago Report

That was the idea :) but unless you are totally against it.

Posted by rugli 6 years ago Report

Oh I forgot its actually very well written..

Posted by Tylerdurden328 6 years ago Report

Well written. Good job mate

Posted by ConcordantOpposition 6 years ago Report

Thanks!

Posted by Insanity7 6 years ago Report

Loved the story.

Posted by shortprey20 6 years ago Report

That was wonderfully written! The emotional turmoil was raw and well done.

Posted by ConcordantOpposition 6 years ago Report

The emotional conflict was really the center of the story, it's nice to hear that I got it right

Posted by VictorBound 6 years ago Report

wow..... O:

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report

Really liked how there were consequences to the whole thing. Makes it feel alive in a way, great story

Posted by ConcordantOpposition 6 years ago Report

I don't think the consequences to vore are brought up often enough in these kinds of scenarios and I wanted to explore that. Glad you liked it.

Posted by Xidas 6 years ago Report

I... can't jerk off to this. Fuck, man. This is some damn good writing.

Posted by HentaiMaster90000 5 years ago Report

well I can :)

Posted by Hamxxdude 6 years ago Report

This is insanely good

Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report

Not really an erotic read for me, so much as a complex and thrilling horror. But still wonderfully written. Wow. Horrifically and wonderfully. I am glad, with how this felt throughout, that she was remorseful in the end.

Posted by ConcordantOpposition 6 years ago Report

The horror potential was definitely on my mind when I was writing this; the juxtaposition between the girls' (initially) lighthearted fun and how things looked from James's perspective seemed like the perfect set up for it.

Posted by Bright 6 years ago Report

Interesting take on the scenario. Well done I say.

Posted by threk 6 years ago Report

While the struggling and all that are usually kinks right up my alley, this is in a way too real to find erotic, it's less a fantasy and more an incredibly well-written account of what might happen were this sort of thing possible. Emotionally gripping by the end, well done!

Posted by Valtron 6 years ago Report

Great story 10/10. More such content)

Posted by Hamxxdude 6 years ago Report

I'd LOVE to see a version of this where Cate actually digests him.

Posted by Lovingutitis 6 years ago Report

I loved this story and would love to see more like it. Part of me would be interested to see if you could come up with a sequel for this, maybe involving her conflict with this new desire she has developed and not wanting to be a monster. Maybe she even actually starts to hallucinate Syd's presence as a manifestation of her desires. Just an idea, but the story is great as it is as well. Lord knows how many great stories were brought down by half-baked sequels.

Posted by abstractCourier 6 years ago Report

Well that was a ride I didn’t expect to go on.

Posted by redsquallff8 6 years ago Report

I love it and I'd volunteer four round two

Posted by voreftw 5 years ago Report

This is one of the most well written stories I've read in a long while. Great job man, plenty of descriptive details during the best part. Hope you do some more same size in the future!

Only thing I wish was added was some more details during the second incident, maybe a short side story :P

Posted by Wertley 4 years ago Report

That was very well written. I was even tearing up at the end.