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Pan and Kalmoor have some nice fun oral sex. unfortunately (or some might say, fortunately) for both parties, Pan learns the hard way that she should not be flinging her weight around when someone is eating you out, and unplanned vore ensues.
this was a commission for Naarkerotics that uses his characters and as such he provided the thumbnail.
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Posted by Rathalos122 6 years ago Report
well looks like someone should have investet into augementing his stomach to deal with metal^^
Posted by Philosoraptor 6 years ago Report
Great dialogue and description as always, and quite an original idea, trying to digest a kind of pony android that is largely made of metal. If just normal, biological components of a body somehow being 'reformed' out of nothing was not implausible enough, the idea of all of her metal components somehow being 'reformed' as well quadruples the absurdity. The only way any kind of "reformation" makes sense to me (since matter cannot spontaneously generate)is some kind of cloning and having one's consciousness and memories stored for injection into the clone in case ones body gets destroyed in a high tech future world. So if Pan had made those 'arrangements' I could see Kalmoor calling up the "Reformation Company" to pick up her metal parts for reuse. In the one place where you mention him nearly out of breath from swallowing something so large, I would have though an anthro bird would have had an epiglottis as do regular birds and reptiles to allow them to breath while engulfing prodigious meals. Since I am not into MLP or reformation magic, I still quite enjoyed this imagining this were a Gryphon who had carelessly swallowed a human knight if full plate armor, and accordingly suffered the consequences. Thanks for sharing!
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
its part of
Naarkerotics vore universe, using a thing called the grid. I am sure he would love to discuss its intricacies. we talked about this for a bit and that is how the idea manifested, as we both thought the warcrime pellet as we called it was a fun idea.
Posted by Naarkerotics 6 years ago Report
The grid is basically a technomagic explanation for reformation.
Guaranteed to always work barring plot
Pauses your soul's ascension as it fashions you a new body and slaps you back down to Pona
Exact location is not precise and comes down to being where its easiest on the grid
Basically its a method for removing death from a universe without desire
Since there is the whole right to die thing that some have after living fulfilled lives