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Tags: alien pred breast smothering endosmatophilia F/F F/M Female Pred Female Prey ghost girl Hammerspace Implied Digestion Implied Fatality Implied reformation Large Breasts liquefaction Male Prey mimic Oral Vore robot girl Same Size Sci-Fi smaller pred Soft Vore Story UE-0006 UE-0045 UE-0049 UE-0054 UE-0096 UE-0150 Unusual Entity Containment Facility writing xenomorph
A commission for balanced-guy, taking place in their Unusual Entity setting.
The Unusual Entity Holding Facility is home to the strange, the inexplicable, and the voracious. A group of trainees learns the hard way that to study the records is one thing... but to meet these entities face to face requires more than just preparation.
Word count: about 3000.
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Posted by HipHugger 6 years ago Report
This is interesting :3
Posted by VaguenessIncoming 6 years ago Report
"Interesting" is certainly the perfect word to describe it ;)
Posted by balanced-guy 6 years ago Report
Glad you find it interesting ;).
Posted by gva274 6 years ago Report
Hm, is everyone here aware of the SCP foundation so there isn't really any reason to mention it?
Posted by balanced-guy 6 years ago Report
I mean I've never made it a secret, that the SCP universe was part of the inspiration for making my own universe. UE-0049 is the only intentional reference I ever made to the SCP Foundation though. The Rest of the UE's I've drawn, written or gotten commissions for, where made solely by myself. and occasionally with input from friends.
Posted by gva274 6 years ago Report
Oh, I apologize, I should have looked more closely, I just scanned the page for any mention of SPC and didn't see it. I'm sorry!
Posted by gva274 6 years ago Report
*SCP. Not talking about the Shark Punching Center today.
Posted by MagicOddEffect 5 years ago Report
Wow, I wasn't expecting proper serious sci-fi on this website. Excellent work.
Posted by VaguenessIncoming 5 years ago Report
Thank you! Balanced-guy's concepts were a lot of fun to work with :)
Posted by balanced-guy 5 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it, Vagueness is a superb writer. Who I'll definitely be commissioning again. ^^
Posted by GrandGrandEater 5 years ago Report
MTF-Spy: Nothing to do here, just a normal guy looking at some strange anomalies and not using this information for a new Group of Interest for the Foundation.
Posted by balanced-guy 5 years ago Report
Funnily enough, I do have GoI in my own setting as well. Though none of them have been featured yet, outside of the logs.
Posted by balanced-guy 5 years ago Report
So I haven't commented on these stories yet, going to try and comment on them more. So I appreciate the different reactions of all the trainees, from overconfidence when dealing with UE-0096, to keeping composure with UE-0045 and acting childish for UE-0054. The main reason for the trainees failing being they panicked or reacted incorrectly, clearly in need of further training.
My favourite thing to come out of the story overall was Koschei, you get a sense that she's really experienced and has been through all kinds of nonsense within the Facility. Surviving it all, when even trained personnel would normally fail. Her interactions with Jenkins give a sense that she's been at this awhile, while Jenkins might be a bit of a rookie, or at least inexperienced.
Overall I enjoyed this story, thanks for writing it. ^_^
Posted by VaguenessIncoming 5 years ago Report
Why thank you! Koschei is just a joy to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed her as much as I did.