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This is a fictional story about a girl, the boy she loves, and the things that keep them separated. It was written from a place of love.
This is my first major completed effort; the first written work I was confident enough to share. It's the spark that helped me to open up to this community and reason I'm here now, spilling my heart onto the pages. It's very precious to me, and I hope that it brings you as much joy as it gave me while writing it.
I realize, despite it being my cherished baby, it's not the prettiest baby. Moreover, I understand that it is a starting point. I hope that what I created here and the things I learned from working on this will, in time, enable me to go on to make more and better stories.
I posted a compiled html version in January of 2019 to the forums, but it didn't get much attention at the time. I have since converted the chapters into separate word documents and did a pinch of cleanup on the spelling and grammar—all of which are uploaded to my gallery. If you read the html version already, you can skip this and the subsequent chapters—there is no new content.
Please enjoy!
Chapter 1 of 12
Posted by Tethys 5 years ago Report
.... Waaaait a second. In case it's not answered later — is that Rebecca Waksman from Collared?
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Posted by Progressive 5 years ago Report
It is she! There will be some explaination about that when I finish proofing that chapter for upload.
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Posted by Tethys 5 years ago Report
Iiiinteresting! Collar(ed) is probably among my top few stories on the site, even with the lack of outright lewd content to it, just because of the intense focus on her mentality, so I'm very much enjoying seeing her from another perspective, even if that perspective is c r a z y.
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Posted by Progressive 5 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it so much. I'm flattered that you consider Collar among your favorites.
With regard to lacking lewd content, I should say up front: it's unlikely that you'll see much lewd writing from me. It's generally something I avoid when I write, unless it's relevant to the story - I tend to be much more interested in plots and conflicts that occur because of vore.
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Posted by Tethys 5 years ago Report
That is precisely what appeals to me about it. Anyone can write a few paragraphs of smut about swallowing and/or sex; in all but a few favorite of my authors I've gotten to the point of just skimming those parts. The conflicts, internal and interpersonal, are far more interesting to me. The way people change when they're forced to make hard decisions, the way that the consumption of others permanently and irrevocably alters their relationship with the world around them, the way that the monstrous becomes mundane... those were the parts that caught my eye.
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Posted by Tethys 5 years ago Report
In short, I think, to follow up, what gets me about your writing is it *has something to say* beyond run of the mill fetish art.
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Posted by RDRW 5 years ago Report
So I've read the first 9 chapters so far and this story is amazing! It's just so interesting to read how you describe this world of casual vore and how you give insights to the characters. I really like how vore doesn't feel like the main focus, but is more just the setting this story takes place (so I would now basically repeat what Tethys wrote). I look forward reading the rest.
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