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Tags: alien pred animal pred Anthro Prey Cartoon Predator F/F F/M Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Human Prey Implied Digestion Large Breasts Male Prey Mini Giantess Oral Vore Reformation Same Size Sci-Fi Size difference Soft Vore Story UE-0007 UE-0013 UE-0450 UE-0832 UE-1000 UE-1930 UE-3050 Unusual Entity Containment Facility Unwilling Prey Willing Pred Willing prey writing
A commission for balanced-guy, taking place in their Unusual Entity setting.
The Feeder looked down at the Entity’s squirming belly; the happy giggles from inside mounted to a scream of pure orgasmic bliss, and with a final gurgle, ceased.
Word count: about 5000.
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Posted by USful 5 years ago Report
Aw, the sad reality of the UE world. A fun read, though. Hope more comes along the way
Posted by VaguenessIncoming 5 years ago Report
I'm certain there will be more to come :)
Posted by balanced-guy 5 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it. ^^
Posted by balanced-guy 5 years ago Report
This story was fun and sad, it continued more of the day to day operations that the Facility goes through, Derrick was interesting to follow, but re-reading his opinion of the Foodies sorta jumps around a lot. I dunno if that's just because the longer the day goes on, the more jaded or distasteful he finds them?
You do get a sense of the unnaturalness of the entities contained, why they give off that aura of being wrong or 'other'. Even the staff can't always be garunteed their safety in what should be a relatively safe task. I did like the description of the Foodies, both their willingness to be eaten and even to disobey to get what they desire. No doubt in the after-action report of UE-1000's breach, that'll come up.
The ending is a real kick in the teeth for poor Derrick, spekaing to someone who doesn't even remember you a few hours later, due to circumstances beyond both his or her control. Overall a wonderful addition to the setting.
Posted by VaguenessIncoming 5 years ago Report
He was under a lot of stress! The Foodies' simplistic mindset is bound to get in the nerves of someone whose entire life is trying to *not* get eaten. At least, that's how I saw it!
Glad you were happy the mood and the ending, those are the bits I'm most proud of :)