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Remilia time babyyyyyyy
I have such immense nostalgia for EoSD that I can't even begin to describe it, and it's a game I'd recommend for anyone who wants to get into Touhou. Sure, some people might call it and its characters overrated, but they're still very special to me for giving me a proper introduction to the franchise. The game itself has a unique mood and tone with its soundtrack compared to later games, and I've always sort of preferred its simplistic design over all the gimmicks introduced with each new game. Because of all that, there's a certain kind of reverance I have for Remilia and her theme, Septette for the Dead Princess...
...So here's a degenerate fetish fanfic to show that reverance!
In this story, Remilia wins and has a nice feast of a certain witch and shrine maiden duo, Sakuya learns something about herself, Patchy comes up with a new spell, Flandre has some nice bonding time with her big sis, and Meiling is still just a normal person who guards.
You can consider this a tribute of sorts to my favorite little vampire; I definitely feel like I put some extra care and attention into this one. I threw in a lot of my favorite aspects about vore in this one too, like mawshots, teasing, mean preds, multiple prey, so on and so forth. Also it's really goddamn long, so strap yourselves in... I just wanted to give each of the SDM residents a little spotlight, showcasing some of their interactions with each other.
Remi's a blast to write, since she can go from an elegant yet cruel, frightening and commanding figure to a giggling mess and vice versa at the drop of a hat. Her ability to subtly manipulate fate is also quite fun to play around with, even if the exact nature of the ability is unknown to this day. She'd probably just use the idea of it as leverage against her opponents, anyway.
Tried some different things as compared to the Eirin story... which is probably going to be a running theme for this series. I like to experiment, after all.
(Fun fact: Some of the lines exchanged towards the beginning are either altered or direct quotations from the game. See if you can spot them!)
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Posted by ItsSongxing 5 years ago Report
Dang, not even a week since your last story, and you've belted out another banger!
It's always nice to see the SDM crew get a bit of love in Touhou vore stories, and seeing just about all of them interacting was a treat! (Except Koakuma, F for our li'l devil.) And of course, Remilia does make a good predator; whether you wanna go the "light appetite" route and give her severe indigestion, or play up her status as the "Scarlet Devil" and make her sadistic, or whatever you will.
I think your take on her is especially good, though - able to have the cruelty and appetite fitting for the "Scarlet Devil" moniker, while still being a gracious mistress to her underlings. I also adore the intimacy and dynamic between Remi and Flan; it's clear the two siblings love each other, and while Flan has a dangerous power, she's still able to control herself.
Overall, a fantastic story! I'm excited to see the next installment in this "Boss Rush" series you've got; I've heard Okuu is up next, it should be fun seeing that danger-bird wreaking havoc on others with a nuclear gut!
Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Yeah, F for Koakuma, my bad. I wasn't really sure what I wanted to do with her during Patchy's scene so I just kept it between the two of them. Rest assured though, if I ever get to writing something for Patchy (which is highly likely since she's my #1 2hu) Koakuma will get her time to shine then.
Posted by ItsSongxing 5 years ago Report
Well, looking forward to seeing Patchy! That fatty is always a treat to see, especially getting fatter by eating people!
Which reminds me that Patchy and Koa got left behind in Kurumi's story. I should probably tie up that loose end, one way or another.
Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report
*eyes emote*
Personally I'd love to see them catch Patchy on one of her better days as she turns the tables and gets some payback, buuuut I wouldn't be opposed to seeing Kurumi and Elly just going in for another meal, either.
Posted by ItsSongxing 5 years ago Report
I'm sorta thinking Patchy is the one who ambushes them, using Eientei medicine to fight through her asthma and anemia. Of course, Kurumi's the easy one to deal with; she knows what a vampire is weak to.
It's the gatekeeper with Sakuya's time manipulation that Patchy really needs to be cautious about~
Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report
Oooh, sounds interesting. Well, whatever happens, I'll be looking forward to it!
Posted by colemercer 5 years ago Report
songsing long time not see you
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
By the gods, I'm... honestly not sure how much I could say to praise this wondrous work of literature art. Just... everything here is incredible - To the sheer domination from an adorable-looking, yet dangerous vampire, to the residence to the mansion's each individual reaction to the bulbous mass hanging from her middle...
It is, for lack of a better term, perfection.
I have an immense soft spot for Touhou as well, it's certainly something I need to give my take on in the form of a story too, but I've got a lot on my hands already so unfortunately, seeing Touhou work from me will take a while. When I have an open slot though, ooohohooo~
Well, I shall repeat myself in saying this is an incredible read! I'm very much eager to see more~
Oh & I gotta say, the teasing between Remilia & Sakuya might just be my favourite part - I'm an absolute sucker for wholesome, yet still dominative teasing! It certainly makes me want to see a side story of the flustered maid's newfound interest in her mistress' gut be fully realised with that acid-nullifying spell~
Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report
Wowowowow, thank you so much! Your writings are amazing too, and they're sort of an inspiration to me. While macro/micro stuff just isn't for me unfortunately, your same-size stuff is incredible, and hearing this from you makes me feel really accomplished. Thank you again!
Posted by SupremeToadLord 5 years ago Report
Oh wow, to think another writer sees my work as inspirational is a high calibre compliment, thank you! I always try to cater to everyone but of course, that's an impossibility - I suppose it doesn't help that I've been leaning more on Macro/Micro as of late, so that's a good reminder that I need to do more same size to balance things out!
Again, thank you for the high compliment & I'm looking forward to your future work~!
Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report
Don't undersell yourself, your stuff is great. Anyway, you just do whatever you like doing most, macro/micro or otherwise. Personally, I'll be very excited for when you get started on Touhou stuff... I wouldn't have guessed you had an appreciation for it as well. I'll be eagerly waiting for the day you post that story (and for whatever else may come in between).
Posted by pbysteria 5 years ago Report
Really nice! Echoing whats been said about rhe character dynamics so far, Sakuya and Remilia being my favorite of the bunch, I really liked the way you describe the stomach in general. The transition to sloshyness was amazing. Reactions to her stomach were really fun to see, looking forward to more.
Posted by Aqualite 5 years ago Report
Well, everyone else has said their piece and vocalized my thoughts for me, so I guess what I can say is that you might have just inspired me to new heights.~
Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report
Ah yes, excellent. My dastardly plan to promote a new surge of touhou content is going just as I wanted, hehehehe...
Err, I mean, glad you liked it!
Posted by Aqualite 5 years ago Report
Honestly I've needed to stop being lazy for a while. Seeing another Touhou fan who's been working hard on their fics is wonderful!
Posted by colemercer 5 years ago Report
that´s true aqualite and hi, long time not see you again
Posted by colemercer 5 years ago Report
this is my reaction after i see this in my notifications https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vGLRLlzt2YQ&list=PLobKWmkzlf2FB9XYNRZYZxxTXif0gHo-U&index=17&t=0s minute 7:20-7:41 and very good story remi is my babe 7///7 and she enter in the vore........oh boy
Posted by LightDragon 5 years ago Report
I can only approve that, as Remilia and Flandre are my favorite preds too. They are among the very few of my preds to have actually won against their preys :D
...Which reminds me I still have to translate my EoSD fanfic...
Posted by LightDragon 5 years ago Report
Also, it goes without saying, I loved the interaction between Remilia and Flandre (ans the other SDM as well). It was cute and/or funny, which is a nice take for a vore story ^^
Posted by colemercer 5 years ago Report
nice my friend you are one of my friends if you like sdm crew nwn
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
With this and the last one, you're very quickly shooting up the ranks of my favorite vore authors. You've executed two or three of my favorite tropes already in masterful detail and are pumping them out at lightspeed to boot. Hope you stay inspired and that these stories start another wave of Touhou literature since it often makes for incredible scenarios.
Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report
Thank you very much for the high praise! I always worry about redundancy or getting stale, and I tend to stress myself out over minute details, but I'm glad it's paying off, at least. As for how this came out so fast, I've been working on this around the same time as the last story. I have one more that I'd been working on alongside these, so you can expect that one soon.
Posted by Ananta 5 years ago Report
well, I think I have a quote from Tf2 to describe Remilia, "Welcome to the Dominatening!" never get to see this side of the devil elsewhere, nice refreshing bit.
good job