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Hello everyone,
This Scene 2 out of 10 for practise. I am not happy about this one. I must say the lower half of the pic is better than the top half. Overal all I like the new shading style that I have chosen. I think next one will be way better.
Btw i am still open for any ideas for scene 10, so if you have any thoughts comment away.
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Posted by KKtheneko 5 years ago Report
Me poking my head out my room to see if all the guests are gone
Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
It looks fantastic. I love the shading on her legs and the angle, it looks like she's maybe casually stretching her calves, or just squeezing those thick thighs together around his head.
Posted by TimeToRun 5 years ago Report
Thanks I am glad you like it. I think if she is going to squeez a bit more he might just pop in for good :P
Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
Hehe, just a casual shift of one leg forwards or back and...schlurp. Or maybe she's bracing against that wall because she's struggling to suck him in. His neck acting like a proper little buttplug neck and stopping her 'accidentally' sucking the 'base' of his head inside xD.
Also as an aside just in terms of 'constructive criticism' since you said you're not happy with this one and think parts look better than others. Don't be disheartened when you feel your picture isn't universally up to your standards. Most artists dedicate (subconsciously or otherwise) more of their time to the 'meat' of their pictures because that's the fun bit; and because it's the fun bit you and I and everyone else don't notice the lack of effort on the rest of the body.
I'm not saying "Don't try." there's always room to practice, and it's great to look at your own work and identify the top half as needing improvement and pick out places to practice; and if you feel like it, trying to get every single bit of the picture looking perfect is great practice. But the best advice I ever heard with creating things is "Finished, not perfect." As long as the focus is finished in your eyes, then encourage yourself to move on, don't dwell on trying to get every single microscopic piece perfect; because then you'll never finish and you'll never improve.
(Idk, overly rambly I'm sorry. I just want you to keep on getting better and producing such lovely work XD)
Posted by TimeToRun 5 years ago Report
No worries I wil continue to make vore art. I must say big thanks for the advice you have gave me here. These type of comments make me feel very motivated to make more art, thanks alot ! :)