Hello there, fellow full tour tag watchers, and everyone else who might stumble upon this.

I have no education or experience in writing, especially in english. The longest coherent thing I wrote in english before this was an overly long comment-rant on a youtube vid. So I want to receive essays detailing everything that's wrong with my grammar! formatting advices are welcome, I know some people get sick from certain fonts and I don't know which one are those.

All characters in this will be my OCs, because I don't watch many shows (and I get turned off if the ones I know get dumped into a forced vore scene) and I can't stand japanese anime voice actressess' voices, so most animes are a big no for me.

The full tour part of the story will be split between the first two parts. I plan to write at least 4 or 5 more episodes of this. I aim to create stuff that I rarely/don't see around here.The first two parts are kinda for world building with pretty standard full tour stuff. I am also obsessed with thin preds having one or more smaller bulges in their bellies, so it will probably (read definitely) be a recurring thing.

I had to rewrite the whole first half of this after finishing, because it was a complete mess with tons of basic sentences. Now I am kinda content with it.

I want to praise

 VoidInVoid

Whose works are criminally underrated in my opinion. They inspired me to write something of my own (my lack of funds also helped it) by proving that a series of porn with 100+ chapters can still be interesting and bring
up new ideas.

TLDR: write advice in comments, check out  VoidInVoid, I wrote about my future plans.

I probably overdone the description so I'll just end it here.

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