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Taking the plunge on posting a story for this site. This is the first of hopefully many stories in a near-future setting I've come up with, and it uses some slang that I hope is easy enough to understand with the context. This one got a little away from me and turned out longer than I planned, but I'm overall happy with it.
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Posted by Gorgrath177 4 years ago Report
Pretty good mate. Great build-up.
Posted by noego 4 years ago Report
Loved it, a great read.
Posted by AllRightAllNight 4 years ago Report
This is good stuff! The character interactions feel very natural and everything flows well. Looking forward to reading more by you :)
Posted by EmissaryOfRainbows 4 years ago Report
Great work! What an excellent first impression.
Posted by rugli 2 years ago Report
needs sequel
Posted by Nuenshi 2 years ago Report
It actually has 2! I've just grouped them together in a folder in the gallery, so feel free to check them out.