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Who says the kids get to have all the fun?
Put my heart into this one! Tried to keep it horny while also having a bunch of lovey-doveyness like the first entry (go read that one if you want some background on these two, will probably do some more of them in the near future)
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Posted by ThePornucopia 4 years ago Report
Great work! I loved the gradual size growth and their chemistry together. However, the fact that neither party seemed all that flabbergasted by self-replicating ballpit balls or the fact that Lei was able to accidentally swallow Olive with her ass seemed a bit odd. I know there's quite a bit of suspension of disbelief going on, but I would've expected both of these experiences to be new enough for there to be more surprise.
Posted by gachabork 4 years ago Report
I agree somewhat, I figured it wouldn't be terribly out of the ordinary since I had implied Lei had some talent for anal play in the first story. But yeah I see what you mean though
Posted by HyperInactivity 4 years ago Report
Now I want to see a sequel where Olive uses Lei as her own personal ball pit, or better yet, hot tub. I mean, Lei made/has access to candy that makes you create food instead of digesting it. She could probably make/get something that neutralizes digestion, too.