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Nobody wants to admit how popular vore is among high-school couples. It's appalling, to be honest. Once the youth of America could look forward to full-time jobs and a proper nuclear family. Now you'll be lucky if you're not stewing in your partner's belly before you're 20.
But you know the agenda. It'd be so embarrassing to swallow someone and you can't even digest them, right? Awkward morning after (especially if non-consensual). Even worse if your stomach is still messy from today's lunch, that's a phat cringe right there bro. So we've mandated medical examinations to ensure digestive capabilities are at acceptable levels in all students.
Will probably continue this story. Was going to stretch it further tonight but well it's 2am innit.
Quick disclaimer: I meself am a humble Brit, and I was writing here an American high school. So apologies if I made any mistakes with the system. Although misrepresentation / cultural appropriation in niche fetish communities probably isn't the biggest problem for American education at the moment. yeehaw pardners
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Posted by hatter 4 years ago Report
Pretty neat premise and attention to detail! It deserves a proper finish so I'm glad you're planning to continue it.
Posted by Freevase 4 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! I was actually planning to finish it all at once but thought it might get a liiitle long.
So just gave it the old Deathly Hallows treatment. Next part should be at latest next week I'd think!
Posted by dcvfgb1234 4 years ago Report
Really lovely little story. Here's hoping for a continuation and that a continuation has nice internal scenes as well as digestion.
Posted by Freevase 4 years ago Report
Thank you! will do my best!
Posted by Rho2468 4 years ago Report
Really looking forward to a continuation!
Posted by Freevase 4 years ago Report
thank you very much!!
Posted by anchorsthenavypony 3 years ago Report
Good story! but what do the characters look like? any reference?
Posted by Freevase 3 years ago Report
hey thanks dude! tbh I didn't have any reference in mind when writing this, just invented these characters on the spot.
Or are you saying I didn't describe my characters' appearances enough in this story? In that case you may be right haha