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After an accident leaves her scarred and lonely, a hopeless girl decides to take a risk and go to a specialist that offers a special 'rebirth' service. Little does she know that that description is quite thoroughly literal.
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Posted by MetalSlime 4 years ago Report
A wonderful debut. I will watch your career with great interest.
Posted by CassiSquish 4 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by MetalSlime 4 years ago Report
Are you taking requests yet, or is it too soon?
Posted by CassiSquish 4 years ago Report
Too soon, I think. I may be open to it in the future though, once I've written a few more stories. Keep an eye out. :)
Posted by Groblek 4 years ago Report
Ooh, very nice! I love the attention to detail you put into this one, and the internal description from Alicia’s perspective as well as the doctor’s narration. And I appreciate the cameo appearance of Professor Smith’s educational tools, that was a fun touch to find.
Posted by CassiSquish 4 years ago Report
I must admit that you've been a massive inspiration for my writings. Thank you for the kind words!
Posted by Groblek 4 years ago Report
You’re very welcome, I’m always happy to encourage others to write this stuff, and it’s always nice to hear that people find mine inspiring. If you ever want to run a story past someone for polish/editorial suggestions, or general brainstorming, feel free to drop me a PM. Though from the two stories you’ve posted so far, it looks like you’ve got them pretty well-polished already. They’re certainly a lot better than my early works were, so I look forward to seeing what else you come up with.
Posted by CassiSquish 4 years ago Report
I'll keep that in mind. Thank you again!
Posted by acrylic 4 years ago Report
Thank you, I enjoyed your work. It was a nice story with a great ending.
Also I like unbirth with unovulation that leads the prey into the pred’s ovaries whether to be reborned or just stored.
Posted by CassiSquish 4 years ago Report
Thank you for your kind words!
I also like this, so look out for more stories like it...
Posted by Rgt 3 years ago Report
Great story!!!
Posted by CassiSquish 3 years ago Report
Thank you. :)