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Eric and Brayden have to get out of town after disposing of Brayden's shitty supervisor. Luckily, Brayden's family was planning a camping trip! How will Eric take to meeting his boyfriend's family?
Warning: Story features disposal/scat :P
What'd did you think of the latest chapter! I love to hear from you guys! Who should Eric devour next?
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Posted by doomed 4 years ago Report
See , now all of braydens family is gonna be suspicious of Eric . He should’ve ate a bear .
Posted by GayPred 4 years ago Report
not if they don't find Dani, he just wandered off ;)
Posted by Xenophage17 4 years ago Report
Very nice installment. Satisfying choice of prey but still a good conflict of desire and family protectivness. Would also love to hear about Eric's young meal in scouts.
Posted by GayPred 4 years ago Report
Thanks!
I don't know if I'll do anything with young Eric, kids really aren't my thing...
Posted by Xenophage17 4 years ago Report
Definetly Understandable, hope I didn't make you uncomfortable.
Posted by GayPred 4 years ago Report
nah, you're good!
Posted by Xenophage17 4 years ago Report
Thanks, let me know if I do stray too far in my comments.
I am a big fan of the character worldbuilding and smutty fun ratio in your stories. Some writers worldbuild a lot which is great if your invested but makes it harder to jump in sometimes while others gulp, gurgle, fart too quick and while that's also fine it lacks the character advantage.
Posted by GayPred 4 years ago Report
Thanks so much! It makes me so happy people enjoy my stories :D
Yeah, I've been trying to keep them pretty open so that someone could really just drop in anywhere (even though they are numbered) and have at least a little bit of worldbuilding and vorniness lol. And if you'd really want to you could just jump to the middle end for the vore part and skip the introduction :P
Also; Are you liking that Eric is a bit more playful and jokes around with Brayden? Eric is kind of based off my personality and that's how I'd be, but I don't know if other people like that :P
Posted by Xenophage17 4 years ago Report
It's definitely an enjoyable persona and it makes sense it would be brought out around someone he cares about. It also serves as a bit of tension and teasing as your not 100% sure what's a joke and a suggestion. I think you could also view it as Brayden being brought closer to the 'dark side' and relaxing his morals.
Posted by Xenophage17 4 years ago Report
It's definitely an enjoyable persona and it makes sense it would be brought out around someone he cares about. It also serves as a bit of tension and teasing as your not 100% sure what's a joke and a suggestion. I think you could also view it as Brayden being brought closer to the 'dark side' and relaxing his morals.
Posted by GayPred 4 years ago Report
They are definatly starting to grow together thats for sure! I think you got it right on the head, Eric's walls are lowerint and Brayden is becoming more acepting and getting into the idea of a pred Bf. :)
Posted by Justsomeone 4 years ago Report
Amazing story, as always. Wish we coulda heard the prey suffer a bit more ^^