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EC First Impressions By Septia -- Report

Cache has heard the rumors of Edgeless Club, a place for Plug university students to sneak away and take the edge off between lectures and study. Though, doing so in, peculiar ways. When she gets a personal invite, by the club president no less, Cache's curiosity gets the better of her.



This is the first story in the "EC: Edgeless Club" series.
The second entry can be found here:
Come back next Filthy Friday for the release.
1st: You are here.
2nd: EC Festival Enrollment.

I wrote this story as a commission for Bishiboys.

Proofreader for this story was Dendollae who also drew the icon, many thanks to them.

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(Character Quote: "Think ya got the guts?" -Zina )


(Quick guide:

Anal insertion, sex, hyper breasts, hyper cock, hyper futa, stomach deformation, unbirth insertion, partial unbirth, scat, mess, rape, breast smothering, popping, graphic, gore, partial cock vore. )


(Legend:

Cent: Short term for centimetre.
Deci: Short term for decimetre.
Chronicle: A series of stories conneted but not sequential. Ongoing stories without regular updates. Rapacitor: A predator who eats for the sake of greed and gluttony.)


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Lukenul

Posted by Lukenul 3 years ago Report

I…. Think I’m not the only one that struggled to read what’s been posted. A lot of the phrasing and terminology is incorrect or confusing which is really disappointing as the parts I could understand were quite enjoyable! It seems like the biggest issue is the attempt to use a thesaurus for every word rather than what it is which can lose the reader or be an incorrect word with a different meaning than intended. The... (I'm hesitant to call) "onomatopoeias" are (probably) overdone and confusing.
I say this because I really enjoy your work, but this is so out of character and not effective storytelling.