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Another Missed Connection By RudeZude -- Report

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As yet another day in quarantine comes to a close, a college freshman becomes the virus's latest victim. With his other roommates not getting back till noon tomorrow, Alexis might be his best chance at getting to safety.

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ConceptCorner01

Posted by ConceptCorner01 3 years ago Report

I really like the use of "I" and "You". I don't think I've ever really seen them together, definitely as a memorable piece like this. Normally it's "you" just to the reader, or "I" as a perspective piece. This is reminiscent of the POV videos I watch in porn (kinda cringe, I know) but it makes it feel more personal, the relationship between me and you, the relationship between the giantess two wrote it and the tiny, me, who is reading it. Nice job, Dude.

ConceptCorner01

Posted by ConceptCorner01 3 years ago Report

I tried writing "Zude" and it autocorrected, my bad.

RudeZude

Posted by RudeZude 3 years ago Report

Not cringe at all! Really appreciate the comment/feedback! Its nice that somebody noticed, because that's exactly why I wrote it like that :)